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ME-v2's avatar
Dark, Tragic, and well written. But also angsty. It's a good piece, it really is, but it gives the impression of someone that's trying too hard to be profound.
thelitbeast's avatar
Thanks for reading my work and for your comments, typically, I tend to aim for honesty as opposed to profundity.
Case0fVertigo's avatar
Wow, so tragic and many strong emotions. Well written.
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Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it. It was fairly hard to write, but it was intended to represent some deep fears that any parent would harbour.
LindArtz's avatar
Dark, and sad too.  A good read; you gave just enough to really get the reader into it; wanting more.  I wouldn't be against additional chapters at all.
thelitbeast's avatar
Thank you- glad you like it- I was writing about any parent's greatest fear. It felt like I could write some more about these characters, maybe I will come back to the story at some point. As always, thanks for reading.
LindArtz's avatar
You're welcome, and I look forward! :)!
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