Oh. Em. GEE!!!!!!!!!
IT CAME OUT SO ABSOFLIPPINLUTELY GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!!!
I don't even know where to start...!!!1)
The addition to her hair to give it length came out PERFECT, absolutely smooth and flawless.2)
Her minty green eyes are beautiful.3)
HER CLOTHES!!!! AUGH, I LOVE HER OUTFIT!!!! THOSE PATTERNS!!!!!4)
Her entire color scheme is so perfect, can I fav like a bazillion times? I love, love, looooove all the warm colors.5)
D'AWWWW HER PHONE!!! A picture of Peri!!! Perfect!!! And you did the reflective surface of the screen so well!!!6)
Lastly: her wings look magical.
You made my line art look 10 times more amazing--I'm having trouble believing I drew this right now, because your colors and shading just upped everything to a hundred here. I want to fav this more than once. I want to have it framed on my wall. I love the strawberry red of her hair, it's so PRETTY. I feel like I need to draw Saffron more just so I can see you color her outfits. I love the pattern on her shirt! (And her skirt!!) And your shading is stunning; there's so much form and depth here, from the shine in her hair (so much volume, it looks like it'd be wonderfully floaty and light) to her cheeks and knees...everything really "pops".