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Memory - Synopsis
Synopsis Memory Josephine Spencer wakes up with no memories. After she gather’s some of her basic information, she is thrown into this huge corporate world called White River Industries. Within hours of waking, she discovers that she isn’t alone in her mind. Two mysterious and polar opposite voices are in her head holding her memories hostage. Externally, she is being guided by two women who are trying too hard to make Jo feel welcomed. As more of her memories get released from the voices in her head, the more she releases that pearly white shell she is hidden in isn’t so perfect. As she continues to learn more about Whit
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Memory - Synopsis
Synopsis Memory Josephine Spencer wakes up with no memories. After she gather’s some of her basic information, she is thrown into this huge corporate world called White River Industries. Within hours of waking, she discovers that she isn’t alone in her mind. Two mysterious and polar opposite voices are in her head holding her memories hostage. Externally, she is being guided by two women who are trying too hard to make Jo feel welcomed. As more of her memories get released from the voices in her head, the more she releases that pearly white shell she is hidden in isn’t so perfect. As she continues to learn more about Whit
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Essentials of a Short Story
Essentials of a Short Story ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Quotes raped from a critique of Nathanial Hawthorn's Twice Told Tales by Edgar Allen Poe - 1837 Edgar Allen Poe, celebrated as one of the finest short fiction writers of all time, was also a literary critic. These are bits of his wisdom on writing short stories, gleaned from one of his critiques. "The true critic will but demand that that the (story's) design intended be accomplished, to the fullest extent, by the means most advantageously applicable…" -- Poe Poe's Prerequisites -- in a Nutshell: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To deliver fullest satisfaction, a short story should be structured: 1) To
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How to Start and Stay Writing
I recently solicited my watchers to ask me writing questions that I would then attempt to answer in a writing guide such as this. This article is my first response, and there will be many more to come. I've been asked to give advice on ways a writer can begin to put words on a page. The bottom line is as simple as this: sit your butt down and write. Duh, right? It's the only way I know to actually write. Sure, sitting your butt in a chair is easy, but getting your fingers to move and stay moving is a challenge. Here are three things that have helped me. 1) Have a goal. Your goal can be as simple as "describe the person in this picture" o
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Character Profile Outline
Okay, before anybody starts to think this is some weird idea, let me explain. For anyone who knows how to write (and I mean, REALLY knows how to write), you understand that a good story has everything written out on paper first.  You know, stuff like Outlines, Plot Triangles, Character Profiles.  This might be of a challenge to some of you and tie you down, but unless you are capable of keeping every piece of information in your mind, this is a good resource to fall back on.  If you do not need this, then fine—you aren’t required to use it.  According to Science Fiction Writers of America, do
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Procrastinators Unite
 Note to all procrastinators... Procrastinators unite! We'll show the world that we are strong enough to do things for ourselves when needed, and not put them off! The world needs us and we are as reliable as everyone else. We aren't lazy, and we aren't a waste of time... One last thing... the meeting won't start until tomorrow.
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Tick. Tick. Tick. Why this girl had a clock in her basement was even a mystery to her. It ticked away her time and effort, reminded her that she didn't have much longer to finish. It echoed off the bare, cracked walls, off the cold floor, and through her aching head. The only light hung dangerously from the ceiling and down on the steel bed, making parts of it shine through the dust, blood and operating instruments. On the bed lay her subject. The one gathering the dust, losing the blood, the one those instruments and utensils were there for, because of. A white cotton sheet covered the lower half of his still body, leaving his chest wide op
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Memory - Synopsis
Synopsis Memory Josephine Spencer wakes up with no memories. After she gather’s some of her basic information, she is thrown into this huge corporate world called White River Industries. Within hours of waking, she discovers that she isn’t alone in her mind. Two mysterious and polar opposite voices are in her head holding her memories hostage. Externally, she is being guided by two women who are trying too hard to make Jo feel welcomed. As more of her memories get released from the voices in her head, the more she releases that pearly white shell she is hidden in isn’t so perfect. As she continues to learn more about Whit
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I'M BACK!
Look out people!  I'm back!  It's going to take some time before I am back full time but I am back.  And I have been *trying* to keep busy.  So, yeah.  I'll share a few links to show you guys what I have been doing, so check it out! Here is my blog -> http://stephwenburg.blogspot.com/  I just started it back in September.  I have been just sharing stuff from old writing pieces, to updated about my writing projects, to sharing other random thoughts and just putting my thoughts out for the world to see.  :)  Please, stop by and check it out for me.  It would be awesome if you did!  Thank you!  Leave some feedback if you would like! Also, I
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update, read if you dare!
Okay, anyway, I am just going to do a quick update.  I am now twenty years old and I don't really feel any different.  haha. :sherlock:  you remember what I do here?   Does anyone know any great horror related (like writing help/ support/ info and other things along those lines) are?  Please share with me! :reading: :library:  I am currently reading Stephen King's On Writing  it's going pretty well.  I think anyone who wants to be a writer, please check this book out!  :) :work:  I am still working out my writer's block. :writersblock:  I have been outlining a novel which I think is going well.  Maybe I will upload the rough draft in my sc
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my birthday
Okay, so today is my birthday... :cake:  I turn twenty today.  And I terrified of that fact. :fear:  I don't know if I am ready or not.  For me, the past couple months I haven't been feeling not so good about myself.  I feel like I don't meet when people (mainly in my family) want for me.  But yeah, that's another story for another day. Okay, so here is a little shameless stuff for me --> :please: :+deathwatch: me for my iation (https://www.deviantart.com/iation) s and :+fav: and if you :love: them :+favlove:'ed Okay, enough with playing with the emotions...  Haha.  Okay, so I am thinking of re formatting my journal stuff and like this...  :)  This is a test run, tell me
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Hello flyingsquirrel
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for Louisa's continuing adventures. See you around!
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Thanks for the watch! :D
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OokamiKasumiProfessional Writer
Thank you for adding Essentials of a Short Story to your Fav's! I'm glad you liked it. I hope it proves helpful.
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junewralleyHobbyist Writer
Hello there steph, thanks for the watch!

I sure am glad my first online attempt at writing a novel made some sense to you.

Would like to hear from you again!
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Thank you for the watch! We appreciate the support and look forward to your submissions :)