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Seriously, I want to know. How many people am I pissing off by doing this comic? I just KNOW I am. Reveal yourself and I may give you a apple. Because I love apples and I don't care about how many wolfaboos and canineaboos I am pissing off. Sorry I have no tolerance for narrow minded people.
Not much happening in this page and I suck at drawing vultures.

Referenced the first panel from this photo: farm1.static.flickr.com/21/351…

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:iconshrimpycorgi:
ShrimpyCorgi Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This looks cool!
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:iconcatbe:
CatBe Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well I for one think that your comic is AWESOME!!! It's not over the top with the sparkle and crap like off-white, and you are original with your canines. They don't fly or have powers and elements and crap. I like it. We need more people like you to teach others that canines aren't demons with elements and powers. :) great job on the comic.
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:iconthecynicalhound:
TheCynicalHound Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, hyenas aren't canines so.. =P
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:iconcatbe:
CatBe Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh they arent? O_O woah.
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:iconlittlehomeofmacarons:
LittleHomeofMacarons Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hyena's are related to cats ;)
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:iconarcticwolfmoonspirit:
ArcticWolfMoonSpirit Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
you suck at drawing vultures? you should see my terrible drawings that would make anyone eyes vomit.
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:icon0becomingx:
0becomingX Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011
why would people be pissed? comics is a labor of love for anyone no one owns it
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:iconshani-hyena:
shani-hyena Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
How come I find this comic only now!? :wow:
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:iconmarcynuk:
Marcynuk Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Professional
Good for you for drawing what you love and not listening to people who whine about how they want you to make your old canine comics etc.

I love the color scheme you have chosen for this chapter and the layered affect the first panel has. Simple but sets the mood.
I think your vultures are pretty damn awesome lol.

My only suggestion is that in the bottom panel I understand what you are going for with the breaking up of the box... but the line across the vulture's next is visually obstructive, and I personally find it distracting. I believe the page would be much stronger if it was removed :) Keep up the good work, I'm off to read more.
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:iconxandei:
Xandei Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
your sure not pissing me off, lol.
and i dont think you suck at vultures, i think they look just fine [=
very good, i love those vultures alot, they look like there planning something evil >:3
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WickedSpecter Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
*reads older comments* It really amazes me how much drama there was ( and probably still is) over this. I think the first page is fine. The vultures look like vultures and it leaves the viewer hanging to ponder on whats going to be on page 2. It looks promising to me. Also are you still working on canine tales or are you giving that one a break for a while?
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:iconglitchyfoxes:
glitchyfoxes Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
nice job using the comic life software is fun right?
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:icondemonovyn:
Demonovyn Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Student
Actually, i think you did an Awsome job on the vultures!
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:iconxxshilukixx:
xXShilukIXx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist Filmographer
I, personally perfer this comic over CT. It looks more promising, and I love its setting. :3 Lovely composition!
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:iconkimi-parks:
Kimi-Parks Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I just discovered your comic and it doesn't piss me off. Why would it? Or are people just mad because it's not the same style as Disney or something else famous?
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CattishDawg Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This comic sounds great! And I don't see anything boring in this page..? :o Every good comic starts like this~. I'm looking forward to this comic. :)
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Juubo Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
DIS FIRST PAGE IS SO BORING.

WHERE'S THE ACTION!?

I MEAN, IT SHOULD BE LIEK KAY FEDEWAS COMIC.
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:iconarcticwolfmoonspirit:
ArcticWolfMoonSpirit Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
everyone has there own opinion but you could at least be nice about it.
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:iconjuubo:
Juubo Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sarcasm seems to fly over your head, doesn't it?
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:iconarcticwolfmoonspirit:
ArcticWolfMoonSpirit Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
no.. no it doesn't.
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:iconweaver1217:
weaver1217 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
I'm not pissed by this comic, quite the opposite actually, I'm pretty excited. It's nice to see someone switching it up for once!
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:iconwolfofthunders:
wolfofthunders Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2010
this comic is sooooo boring, why nothing is hapening?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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:iconthecynicalhound:
TheCynicalHound Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope you are being sarcastic.
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:iconmabela:
mabela Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ignore the troll if that helps.
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:iconwolfofthunders:
wolfofthunders Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
eh?
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:iconthecynicalhound:
TheCynicalHound Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You claim this comic is boring when it is just the first page? Are you being sarcastic? If not, I facepalm.
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wolfofthunders Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
on your first page nothing is happening look at the first pge of kays comic [link]

there is a battle and a lot of characters, huge different , duuh
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Shadow-Demon-Zair Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
This is xAshleyMx's comic though, not Kay Fedewa's. Can't you read names?

If you don't like this comic, then jesus, just exit and go find somethig filled with wolves and fighting to suit your likings. :|
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WesFTW Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010
I agree with Wolf Of Thunders. Ashley should stop being so artistic and original and copy all the other comics out there. Another amatuer comic artist did it a different way, so that must make it OK. Forboding and setting a scene is SO old. This is America where people have the attention spans of a 2 year old. Ashley should totally make a confusing page that tells us nothing about the setting and only shows us a bunch of characters that we don't care about instead of artistically and creatively setting the stage for something big to go down.
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:iconmabela:
mabela Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You
Win.
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:iconshadow-demon-zair:
Shadow-Demon-Zair Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010
I really hope that was sarcasm.
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whitesky10 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
there is something happening if you see a shit load of vultures it generally means something is dead... so its almost like a cliffhanger...
and not all comics HAVE to start with action
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:iconwolfofthunders:
wolfofthunders Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
3 is not a shitload unless they are very shitty. And their smiling!!!!
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Da-Lizzard Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
If you were about to be fed I'm sure you would smile too.
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insomniacawake Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Kay's comic has no explanation as to what's going on on the first page, it flings you into an action scene right away. You have to have a good mix of art and story to make a good comic. I wouldn't compare the two. This comic is meant to start of slow so you can get a good feel of what's happening and the setting. It's narrow minded to assume the comic is "boring" on the first page because it doesn't fling you into some fight you know nothing about. Interpretation is very important. I respect that you have an opinion but it would be nice if you actually gave the comic a try as opposed to insulting it because it's not like kay's and doesn't throw you into a battle right away.
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Darfix Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, because throwing a shit load of "action" right into the story off the top really adds to the plot, especially when no reasons for the war/battle are explained :3

You are observing two different forms of story telling right here between BBA and TS. One of them is the equivalent of a kid waving their arms around rabidly for attention, while the other is a more sophisticated approach to story telling.

It's not a difficult concept to grasp.
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:iconwolfofthunders:
wolfofthunders Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
i wasnt talking to you
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:icondarfix:
Darfix Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You reply as if I give a damn.

Were my words too difficult to counter? I'm so sorry.
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:iconthecynicalhound:
TheCynicalHound Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*groans*

Get a fucking brain, animals don't have to be killing each other on the first page to make it interesting.

Duuuuh.
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:iconwolfofthunders:
wolfofthunders Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
i know but why so b oring and please dont me call me stupid couse you dont know me.
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:iconthecynicalhound:
TheCynicalHound Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excuse me but...

There doesn't have to be fucking fighting in the first damn page, you twat. Last time I checked this isn't generic wolf comic and this comic DOES NOT contain a war, there is no point. Get the fuck out.
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weaver1217 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
X3 trolling, clearly
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:iconmmkeene:
MMKeene Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nah... you draw vultures better than me. I also don't know why people would be ticked off by this comic. I can take a few guesses though. Nice tones with the oranges and such. Keep it up!
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2010  Professional General Artist
Well well well, now this is an interesting discovery. I was randomly browsing throygh people's favourites when I just found this, and judging by the cover, there will be hyenas on this, and they even look like hyenas. Judging by the comments I presume you have done your homework, and I hope I'm not going to see the biggest trapholes that infest most of the stories about hyenas. Spotted hyenas have a unique and fascinating features regarding on gender and species in general, and it's truely a shame when people ignore them and make stories about big, strong and heroic male hyenas with their tender and fragile hyena girls.

This looks promising. :)
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:iconhitaka5ever:
Hitaka5Ever Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I kinda like your vultures :D The backgrounds are stunning. And this comic looks like it'll be a huge hit. I'm a non-narrow minded person, don't you worry about that ;)
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DawnFrost Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
you mean this is a comic with out wolves what so ever?!!!!! OH MY GOD HOW CAN YOU EVEN CONSIDER THIS A COMIC???!!! your such a wanna be comic artist with your none wolf attitude.

but seriously I'm actully really looking forward to this comic. I've been watching Big cat Diary almost none stop for the past 3 weeks, and Hyenas are my 3rd favorite safari animal (leopard, cheetah, then hyena)

The page looks great, can't wait to see more =]
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SaraaLuna Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like Vultures, and not to nit-pick, but everyone apparently loves the evil tree and the Vultures doing their... odd pose in front of the camera in African shows or comics. It's everywhere. BWHAHAHA! :rofl:
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Giggarex Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
I will say your vultures are not as good as your mammalian drawings but they are amazing. Even more amazing is the two with facial expressions are not the same by the looks of it (one has an evil grin and the other is all "this is sch beutiful existence if only the sun was always like this when I was full"). Which meens you avoided makeing them brainless side characters.
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AntiDarkHeart Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I like your vultures, they look good. Are you plannin' on doin' 2 comics at once? Seems like alot of work on your hands :XD:
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WolfieBobcat Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol i think this comic will be good even if i dont know wat its gonna be about. i'm tired of wolf/canine comics even if wolves are my fave animal the plots seem to be pretty much the same.plus this one has hyenas which are my other favorite animal
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