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I back, fuckers! Wooooo!
(Character sheets for three of the four characters are here ) A couple things to explain about this section.
First, the swearing. "Fucking lizard" makes more sense in Russian, the language all the characters are speaking. The word is "gad" literally "lizard" with the meaning of "slimy bastard." "Fuckhead" would be more accurately translated "Ass face," but that sounds kinda dumb. In short, these characters are slightly more creative cursers in their native tongue.
Second, the tone. It shifts twice, intentionally each time. Those blocks of text at the beginning are Bunny while under the influence of her favorite drug, music. The annotated dialog in the bulk of the story is the normal Burgandy, and the scattered dialog at the end (including how the narration fades out) is Bunny getting angry.
Third, Bunny's an android. Bunny is her real name, and Burgundy is what she likes people to call her.
Forth, though very few of you probably care, she's listening to her music using her cell phone, her most prized possession.
(Character sheets for three of the four characters are here ) A couple things to explain about this section.
First, the swearing. "Fucking lizard" makes more sense in Russian, the language all the characters are speaking. The word is "gad" literally "lizard" with the meaning of "slimy bastard." "Fuckhead" would be more accurately translated "Ass face," but that sounds kinda dumb. In short, these characters are slightly more creative cursers in their native tongue.
Second, the tone. It shifts twice, intentionally each time. Those blocks of text at the beginning are Bunny while under the influence of her favorite drug, music. The annotated dialog in the bulk of the story is the normal Burgandy, and the scattered dialog at the end (including how the narration fades out) is Bunny getting angry.
Third, Bunny's an android. Bunny is her real name, and Burgundy is what she likes people to call her.
Forth, though very few of you probably care, she's listening to her music using her cell phone, her most prized possession.
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Verdy naice. verdy naice....
Heh it will be fun to see when they meet up with nana and ... shit i feel stupid... ummm oh raight! Jaq!
Heh it will be fun to see when they meet up with nana and ... shit i feel stupid... ummm oh raight! Jaq!