Oooh, I really love the illustrations you made of the characters in the story. The linework you are using to draw the details on the characters is so simple, yet it really sets the mood and is quite a change from the style you use on the characters during normal scenes. I really like how you pull this off.
I can really see it being one of those storytime animations where the lines keep moving to make up the characters and environments. (I forgot what it's called, I apologize.)