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Cambion-Hunter Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018
It will be interesting to see how she gets out of this wet situation..........
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MisterLuK Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeeess! Haha, I knew it! (I'm so dumb to analyze an art like that 'v')

But, well, if I must be dumb, let's be dumb with honor!
So. I like the way she's describing the scene. It really looks she knows that she's in -whatyouknowicanttellititwouldspoil- and I wouldn't be surprised if she was really. It's a really good choice for you and for the story. For the story because it looks creepy and attractive, so we really want to know the next, with alot of suspense. Nice way to keep us alert.
And for you because it open quite nice possibilities -I already imagined three (remember? I'm a dumb) - and alot of free space to do the near future..

Keep it up, it will end great.

Well, if you read till here :
-first : you deserve a medal of honor, because sometimes I can be REALLY annoying
-and second : DON'T DO LIKE ME! my brain's totally broken, if you do like me, you'll end like me!
On that positive note, I let you enjoying the story! :D
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The-SixthLeafClover Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
I find the hardest part of writing is the beginning or a plot twist. Since I am no master of literature. But perhaps I can carry this idea I spun through my head. Thanks!
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MisterLuK Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know that feeling. My suggestion : examine all the possibilities in your head till you get the perfect one, and then write it down. After, every writer has his own technic, like in all arts, and mine is probably not the best one.
Believe me, by all the books I read, your has one of the best structure, as far as I can see, so you could easily become an international writer.
Did I told you that you can do whatever you want with your story?

Well all the pleasure is mine!
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EagleThor Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh no ! don't drown !   Oh Noes! 
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rodrev Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love the style you have drawn this in.
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