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Vapor -Profile- (+ SpeedPaint) by The-Butcher-X Vapor -Profile- (+ SpeedPaint) by The-Butcher-X
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:iconhumanosiniestro:
Hello Again, Butcher :)

Vapor Trail es mi segunda pony de fondo preferida, siendo superada por Coco. Pero en fin, me gustó mucho cómo jugaste con la paleta de colores de su pelaje. Más que un simple blanco sólido, tiene una combinación variada de colores en cada sombra, a diferencia de otros dibujos que sólo son un azul grisáceo sólido. Sin duda, supiste aprovechar el AirBrush.
También es destacable la luz del sol pegándole en el crim, cara y pata. Lo mejor de todo, fué el fondo. Es sencillo, pero no tanto como los de tus dibujos anteriores. Aquí veo unas nubes bien trabajadas, un azul muy hermoso en el cielo, además de los pegasos del fondo. Estoy muy satisfecho porque encontré un dibujo más de Vapor. Gracias, Bucther ;D
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Okay, seeing as I am one of the actual judges from the contest hosted by GJ301, I'll make my Critique right here to make it easier for you.

I already really like it for how I literally know so little of this character, yet you've already displayed quite a bit about her. That expression suggests a happy warm personality and the background says s a bit to her.

I also truly like your art style, and how warm it comes off in this picture, very fitting for MLP especially.

The part I am most interested in discussing is of course your technique, which I really love. No need to discuss pony anatomy or cartoon expressions, because that would be a statement to what's very obvious. What I feel should be given more attention is how you colored the character and added subtle, but oh so very necessary light and shadow effects.
The most notable of these of course belongs to the subtle glow in the top left, being the sun, and how that source of light subtly reflects on the characters bluish fur/skin, and I especially respect how you knew when to judge the lights influence, and when it would end. As we can see it barely appearing and fading on her front leg.
The shadows of the limbs and the back of the rest of Vapor's anatomy may be considered slightly cartoonish or in the way of cell shading, but it's still a fully admirable form of shading and looks very appealing. Especially with how the shadows are colored to be a complimentary green for her pale blue color.
Finally is the background, which while not the main focus, I have to admit I like. The clouds look ultra soft and fluffy, fitting for Equestria, and the blue of the sky clearly has a mix of blues, preventing it from looking flat and stale. Something I personally struggle with.

In the end, like all your work, this is very nice indeed, and it's also very generous of you to participate in the contest as well as sponsor it.
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:iconlunarsstorm:
LunarsStorm Featured By Owner May 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Gotta say this one and the Gabby one is tied as my fav for the contest entries <3
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner May 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Also the "Gabby Profile"?
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:iconlunarsstorm:
LunarsStorm Featured By Owner May 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
The other Gabby contest entry for this contest  The Adventures of Gabby by Ikarooz
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner May 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah ok. XD
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:icontyler2135:
tyler2135 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017
"snuggles her"
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:iconprimordialnothingnes:
Cute pony
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:iconbrandonale:
brandonale Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
aww yeah.
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:icon1mlp1:
1mlp1 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Wow thats good , my art Sucks 
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:icontvideshow:
TVideshow Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
She looks absolutely adorable, you mate did a terrific job on drawing that pony. ;)
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:iconmetaldudepl666:
MetalDudePL666 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Student Artist
Love This is sooooo CUTE! Love 
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfluttershyyayplz:
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:iconcajobif:
cajobif Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
Lovely work
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconcajobif:
cajobif Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
My pleasure
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:iconxajelandrox:
xAjelandrox Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Hobbyist Filmographer
Pegasos con siluetas multicolor, debe ser un nuevo espectaculo de los Wonderbolts.
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Si viste la serie, al menos sabes de que se trata no?
XD
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:iconxajelandrox:
xAjelandrox Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Hobbyist Filmographer
¿Vapor Trail o el episodio?
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
El episodio.
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:icontemplar127:
templar127 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
YAY! VAPOR!!! X3
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrdsoawesomeplz:
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:iconnicolasdominique:
NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Professional Artist
Really lovely Vapor :D
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconexcitedrarityplz:
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:iconj47fly:
J47fly Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017
Vapor Trail is BEST PONY WAIFU! Heart  :squee: 
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsoawesomedashplz:
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:icondj-gumball:
DJ-Gumball Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this! *squee*
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsoawesomedashplz:
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EqDBot Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017
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:iconstryderfox:
stryderfox Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Cute pony!
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfluttershyyayplz:
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:iconneverlaststanding:
NeverLastStanding Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist
SO ADORABLEEEEE
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfluttershyyayplz:
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:iconchaosphantom444:
ChaosPhantom444 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Excellent work! ^^
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconmp2502:
mp2502 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017
Yay, That's an awesome Vapor Trail.
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrdsoawesomeplz:
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:iconmp2502:
mp2502 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 7, 2017
I just really love the warm, soft and bouncy your artstyle you have. It really works well for both your SFW and NSFW stuff.

I don't know anything about art. But I know what I see and I know I like it (though your commission delivery times could use some work ;) ).
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:iconjodrote:
jodrote Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017
so cool 
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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:icondancinninjac:
dancinninjac Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017
So cute!
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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:icontehwatcher:
tehwatcher Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017
1st wow

2nd this is amazing the color texture its wow

3rd and cute wwork love the background and rember her interesting story about her 

4th and you made her mane more beautiful wow
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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:icontehwatcher:
tehwatcher Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017
1st your welcome

2nd :)
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:iconfrostthehobidon:
FrostTheHobidon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017
amazing
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconfrostthehobidon:
FrostTheHobidon Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017
you are welcome :D
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:iconblackwind06:
Blackwind06 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
sweet pic
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:iconthe-butcher-x:
The-Butcher-X Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconblackwind06:
Blackwind06 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
no prob
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Isn't she sweet?
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