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.:Moment before the accident:. (EqG Shorts) by The-Butcher-X .:Moment before the accident:. (EqG Shorts) by The-Butcher-X
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Me gustan mucho estos dibujos de los cortos de EG, incluso si como dije no soy fan porque no son cosas canónicas. Ahora, sobre este dibujo, me gustaría decir que está muy bonito, especialmente por tener una temática relativamente oscura: Una foto tomada antes de un accidente, donde Dash podría salir con el rostro severamente lastimado. No ví el corto, pero me gusta el dibujo, y como antes mencioné, me gusta que haces más que simplemente calcar algún fotograma al azar del episodio para dibujarlo a tu estilo. Haces algo desde cero y esa es la magia de tus dibujos cuando te basas en un episodio o corto.
En otros aspectos de este trabajo tuyo, puedo destacar un poco el fondo, hablando especialmente de los arbustos junto a las farolas que hay tras los personajes que intentan advertir a Dash. Parecen a simple vista vectores, pero según lo que veo, se puede ver que estos en realidad tienen algunos detalles extra de sombreado, según yo para que coincida con el ambiente. En el cielo esta vez no hubo nubes, lo cual es raro a decir verdad, usualmente dibujas aunque sea una de estas. Pero no considero que sea algo negativo a final de cuentas. Y sobre los personajes de fondo, puedo decir que están bien, considerando que son meros elementos de fondo que no deben interferir con lo principal, por eso es comprensible si no tienen detalles.
El arcoiris tras el cabello de Rainbow Dash está excelente, se ve de lujo, con una paleta de colores variada y viva. De lo único que me puedo quejar es que, a pesar de que Rainbow Dash junto a su patineta están bien hechas, el efecto de desenfoque está mal aplicado. En vez de aplicarlo a ella, creo que debiste aplicarlo al fondo, o sea, a los otros elementos, para que veamos todo desde la perspectiva de Rainbow Dash, quien a final de cuentas es la protagonista de la escena; Desde su perspectiva, ella vería el resto del mundo borroso por el movimiento, y no al revés. Aunque como es la primera vez que usas el efecto borroso para un momento de acción y movimiento, puedo dejarlo pasar.
En conclusión, es un bonito dibujo, me ha gustado sobretodo porque me quedaré con la intriga de saber qué pasará después de que ella choque.
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:iconbroad86new:
broad86new Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is not going to end well for Rainbow Dash...unless someone saves her.

Very nice.:D
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:iconanotherpasser:
anotherpasser Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2019
The branch hit rd's helmet and a voice sounds ''we didn't penetrate their armor'':D (Big Grin) 
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:iconflareemerald77:
FlareEmerald77 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2019  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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:icontehwatcher:
tehwatcher Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2019
1st DASH LOOK AT FOR THAT TREE (movie refence)

2nd nice owkr not sure how you make it look like this its looks aweosme

3rd this will live a mark
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:iconrainbow15s:
rainbow15s Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
RD, watch out for that tree!!!
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:iconoudieth:
OudieTH Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2019  Hobbyist Artist
We'll
Be
Right
Back
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:iconbuzzard20:
buzzard20 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2019  New Deviant
Eeeeeeeeee this hurts by just seeing it!!
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:iconnickmaster64:
NickMaster64 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh dear i bet where going to see the outcome pretty soon >w<
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:iconkot237:
Kot237 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019
I was looking at the trunk of the tree... but then I noticed the branch with the little twinkle. We all know what that means... hope her helmet is tick enough. :D
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:iconeverlastingjoy:
EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019  Hobbyist Filmographer
You evil, evil man!


That was funny.
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:icongoatink:
goatink Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really awesome and funny, nice work :D
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:iconknackmaster77:
KnackMaster77 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
to be continue meme 
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:iconud-the-imp:
Ud-the-Imp Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019
WATCH OUT FOR THAT - *shink* - .......that was a far worse sound than what I was expecting.  CALL AN AMBULANCE!!!
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:iconappulsjack:
APPULSJaCk Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019
JEEEEEESUS BUTCHER, I physically recoiled
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:iconsaber360:
saber360 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2019
Oh no, OH NO, that's not good. O.O;

She's not gonna get her skull impaled by that sharp tree branch, is she? < : (
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:icontheforgottensiren:
TheforgottenSiren Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2019  Hobbyist Artist
awesome
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:iconkawat3ngusan:
KAWAT3NGUSAN Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2019  Student General Artist
No Dash, watch out, there's a tree, and a branch, look out!
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:iconphoenixflambe:
And that's where the video stops.
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:iconfrostthehobidon:
FrostTheHobidon Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2019
oh dear O.O
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:icon17princesstwi:
17princesstwi Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2019
Oh no, somebody save her!

-I was gonna go with George of The Jungle joke, but someone comment down below already beat me to it, lol.-
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:iconihd316:
IHD316 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Since she going straight to the tree. Then what the sparkle on the point of the branch? I bet this going to be bloody.
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:iconplcthecd:
PLCTheCd Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Writer
OUCH...
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:icondiegomolina:
diegomolina Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
lol like
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:iconsweetiebot3000:
SweetieBot3000 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is going to be painful for her o-o
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:iconphaedrolous:
Phaedrolous Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Student General Artist
George of the Jungle - George S2 "Geroge knows where this going."
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:iconbobhershey:
bobhershey Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
♫ ♪ Dash ♫ ♪
♫ ♪ Dash ♫ ♪
♫ ♪ Dash on the skateboard ♫ ♪
♫ ♪ Watch out for that tree! ♫ ♪
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:iconnavesblue:
Navesblue Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Oh please do an after one.
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:iconl-master:
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Artist
aprovecha las visita y pide donativos para tus múltiples "curitas" 
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:iconmrsoniccloud:
MrSoniccloud Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just heard Maud's monotone voice saying "It was at this moment that Rainbow Dash knew, she fucked up.", followed by that guitar theme of Jojo's...
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:iconmeiyeezhu:
meiyeezhu Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
This isn't how I imagine Rainbow being on top of the tree
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:icontheretroart88:
TheRETROart88 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what a good job I already did mine too xdrainbow dash my little pony mlp brony 
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EqDBot Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
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:iconappulsjack:
APPULSJaCk Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019
HOW IS THIS ALLOWED ON EQESTRIA DAILY!?!??!
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:iconeqdbot:
EqDBot Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019
What do you mean?
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:iconappulsjack:
APPULSJaCk Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019
Its called a joke i was just surprised
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:iconeqdbot:
EqDBot Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019
I see! But I understand your surprise to an extent, sometimes it is very surprising what is featured and what is not.
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:iconappulsjack:
APPULSJaCk Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2019
ok? sorry for the trouble
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:iconmarcyeveret:
MarcyEveret Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Student Digital Artist
ahh she'll be fine shes got safety on ;)
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:iconxrosbrony:
XrosBrony Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Rainbow look out!!!!!!!!
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:iconretro7:
Retro7 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019   General Artist
Welp, least she's wearing a helmet ^^;.
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:iconimperfectxiii:
ImperfectXIII Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh hell
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:iconmegagundam7778:
MegaGundam7778 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist
RAINBOW WATCH OUT 
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:iconjurihanfan2014:
JuriHanFan2014 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Writer
Que the "wasted" GTA Meme
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:iconjohnthegamer2114:
JohnTheGamer2114 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Artist
DASHIE NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconthetwinny:
TheTwinny Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Rainbow Dash likes going extreme and how extreme it'd be to be injured slamming into prickly danger?
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:iconmiky98:
Miky98 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Rip Rainbow Dash
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:iconrainstorm917:
Rainstorm917 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
"She Need Some Milk!" xD Hey Dash? There was a tree there. 😂
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:iconacewissle:
AceWissle Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
And then she got stuck in the tree and Applejack had to save her. No wait that was the other way around. Oh well.
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