OMGG This is gorgeous! And a human!!! You reaallly are somthing Thally-san!
I love the design of her swimsuit and scarf! And the way you blurred those snowflakes brushes really works well with the picture and background! Like it's steam from a hot springs or something
I apologize for what I'm about to say, though, but her shoulders look a little off...other than that the overall picture is superb!