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So Tom (Sunny) decides he wants to see his ex girlfriend almost naked. He hides into the lockerroom and of course they find him. The girls decide to give him a taste of their secret weapon. They all turn him in a different way. 15 changes from 15 girls.

Note: still working on my grammer I know there are typos and errors. Not my fault (well actually it is but I'm trying to fix it).

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Very well done again, except for all the typos. But beyond that good story.
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Is it annoying?
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Only because there are so many of them.
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Hey,
you commented on one of my stories that there are many typo's, I would love to have a prereader who géts all the typos out of the story before I post them... Would you want to be my prereader?
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That's great, if you could do [link] that would be awesome.
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I will try to decrease it
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