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humble-abode Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Biggest thing is anatomy, especially with your anthros
The chest to arm/head/hip ratio isn't proportional
I suggest looking up body types and practice anatomy more
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TestToBePossessed14 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
K
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RedtheSinopa Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2018  Student General Artist
One large thing i motice throughout your works is lack of fixed light source.

The lighting in your pictures often appears to be coming from two or three places at once. Try working on having your shading more tactically placed to correspond with the light source.
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TestToBePossessed14 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, I really do need to work on that.
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RedtheSinopa Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2018  Student General Artist
Indeed. It is the bane to many artists.
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TestToBePossessed14 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mhm
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Shenree Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Your colorpencil drawings are great, it's hard to say anything you need to improve on those. Maybe you should try more intensive colors or more defined shading? I don't know. But in your digital art i see some things to improve. Basically it's shading. I think it would look cleaner if shading would have sharper edges. I don't reccomend using airbrush for shading amd lights, i don't know if you do. Also check out this tutorial caughtinthehurricane.deviantar… This helped me so much earlier. I hope it was helpful someway^^
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TestToBePossessed14 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ok. Thanks
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TheSaladCram Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Hecc I'll try my best to but most of the time I don't know what to say, your art is already better than mine as is
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TestToBePossessed14 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ok
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