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Like all of your ink-work, the technique and execution of your vision are simply fantastic. You capture quite a bit with only two tones...


There's not a whole lot to add constructively to this. The style of the art does seem to be a more basic, concept-esque look, which mea...

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Like all of your ink-work, the technique and execution of your vision are simply fantastic. You capture quite a bit with only two tones. It's a great bit of fantasy, and I'm wondering what it might be fanart from.

(1) Vision: 5/5 - Excellent! Phenomenal. I definitely feel I get a sense for the character, even without knowing the specifics of the source.

(2) Originality: 4/5 - Without a reference piece I'm forced to do a bit of guess work here. However, whether you had some sort of model for reference or otherwise, the end result is stunning enough on its own.

(3) Technique: 3/5 - I mean, my ink work wouldn't come off nearly as well, even if I was tracing something. So the technique is above par. But, it's also a much simpler, quicker, sketchy-sort-of-thing which makes it difficult to rate accurately.

(4) Impact/Overall: 4.5/5 - I love it, personally. All other things aside, I see a character brought to life. Whether there's a specific source for the character or no.

Thanks for sharing your art :)
Novis Starter (Grass) Vineuki!
Preview of Vineuki. Dex entry (PTU style) will be posted soon.

In Novis, they've discovered that trainers and Pokémon can bond in such a way that it affects the Pokémon's color. However, some colorings are rarer than others, and represent very specific bonds between Pokémon and trainer.

Created by Tesagk, Regent, Moriya, Anise, & others PTU Discord
Art design by :iconmeg4mente:

Fakémon concept owned by Steven Blea. Art owned by Raul Brener. This concept may be used and reproduced for non-commercial purposes. You may alter the concept into different styles, mediums, and utilizing different colors. However, if you wish to refer to it as Flomard from the Novis region, you must give proper credit.
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Novis Starter (Water) Lilipin!
Preview of Lilipin. Dex entry (PTU style) will be posted soon.

In Novis, they've discovered that trainers and Pokémon can bond in such a way that it affects the Pokémon's color. However, some colorings are rarer than others, and represent very specific bonds between Pokémon and trainer.

Created by Tesagk, Xavion, Guti, Anise, & others PTU Discord
Art design by :iconmeg4mente:

Fakémon concept owned by Steven Blea. Art owned by Raul Brener. This concept may be used and reproduced for non-commercial purposes. You may alter the concept into different styles, mediums, and utilizing different colors. However, if you wish to refer to it as Flomard from the Novis region, you must give proper credit.
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Novis Starter (Fire) Flomard!
Preview of Flomard. Dex entry (PTU style) will be posted soon.

In Novis, they've discovered that trainers and Pokémon can bond in such a way that it affects the Pokémon's color. However, some colorings are rarer than others, and represent very specific bonds between Pokémon and trainer.

Created by Tesagk, Anise, Diesel, Dox, & others PTU Discord
Art design by :iconmeg4mente:

Fakémon concept owned by Steven Blea. Art owned by Raul Brener. This concept may be used and reproduced for non-commercial purposes. You may alter the concept into different styles, mediums, and utilizing different colors. However, if you wish to refer to it as Flomard from the Novis region, you must give proper credit.
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There's not a whole lot to add constructively to this. The style of the art does seem to be a more basic, concept-esque look, which means that a lot of the smaller details aren't left out as a product of skill, but, rather, for ease of getting the project done and to completion.

I like the dynamic pose, I think it calls back to the badass, active heroine type character that seems to have been the origin behind the design. She's scantily clad, but all things considered, it sort of fits with what the character seems to be designed for. The only clothing article that seems out of place is the scarf, and that still adds a distinctive styling element that I imagine is important to the character.

Overall, I believe it accomplishes what was set out for. In that sense, it's perfect. That being said, it does leave someone wanting more, to see a more detailed representation, as all concept art should do.

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Steven Blea
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This is a place primarily to show off commissions I've had done, and for me to watch the amazing creations of my fellow artists (though I'm a writer, as opposed to a visual artist.)

I'm always willing to offer my thoughts in a critique.

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