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I continued to stare at the figure and realized that it was kind of blurry. So someone was in my house earlier when I was at school. I hope they didn't take anything! I thought frantically. I ran up the stairs and went straight to my room. Panting I looked around. It seemed that whoever it was; was merely looking but did not take anything. "What kind of person comes into a house and doesn't take anything!" I yelled. Not that I'm complaining, it's just weird.

  BAM! "Eeeee! Oh man I hate thunder." I complained. Then I saw something dart across the room. "Who's there?" I asked. There was a demonic chuckle. "So you can see me? Excellent. Then you must have a strong soul." said a low bone chilling voice. My eyes widen with ice cold terror. Something was coming out of the shadows; when it came out there was a clash of lightning. It was one of the huge monsters, the ones that I always saw. I thought I was scared a minute ago; now I'm terrified. "Come on kid I love it when my prey runs. It gets me thrilled for the chase." the monster laughed as he grumbled. "Y-your one of those monsters that I used to see." I stated. "Heh. Yeah we call our kind "Hollows" kid."

"What do you want from me?" I asked

"Did I not say what I want from you?"
I shook my head no shaking from the over whelming fear. He chuckled "I want to eat your soul." I broke out in an ice cold sweat and started to run. So that was what had taken the lives of all my friends; these "hollows" ate their souls. But why? Where they originally after me?
Before I got down stairs the hollow was in front of me. It laughed again "Ha! I thought you would be faster than this. Oh well I like it when my food screams." I was about to scream when the hollow smacked me on the side of my head. I had made contact with the wall. After that there was nothing but darkness.
There is nothing here; I feel strange. My body feels so heavy. I hear someone. "Ren-chan!" Who's calling me? "Ren-chan! Wake up! Ren-chaaaan!" Ren-chan? No one has called me that for years. "Please, Ren-chan!" "Who are you?" I ask. The voice sounded like it belonged to a young girl. But what is she doing here? I heard a gasp. "Ren-chan! Ren-chan you have to open your eyes! Hurry!" I wake up in a house with half of it missing.

"Huh?" Am I alive?

"Ren-chan! Run!" The girl screamed.
My chest hurts so much. I looked around for the girl but the only thing that I saw were a cat and a girl lying on the floor. She looked just like me. "My chest; why does it hurt so much?" I ask no one. I looked down and saw a chain in my upper torso. I pulled on it. There was a stabbing pain. "Ahhhh! What's going on here!?" I saw the hollow was still here.
"Don't just stand there! Run for it!"
"Who are you? Where are you?" I ask looking around.
Next thing I know the cat bits my foot. I jerk it back. If I have to run I can't leave the cat behind. I pick it up and started to run.

The hollow must have heard me running because it was right in front of me once I got to the park. "That's better. You're much faster now. I think I'll even give you a head start. You better start running kid." The hollow said. I backed up and ran up into a tree on the far side of the park. I sat the cat down next to me on the branch. We were both soaked. I sighed "I think we'll be safe here." "I don't think so. And next time I tell you to run you run Ren-chan."

"Ok, ok I—"I stopped in mid-sentence. I stared at the cat "Did you hear something?" I asked it. "No it's a good thing that you can run fast Ren-chan." The cat said. "Good that's what —"I stopped again. I looked at the cat once more with wide eyes. "Why are you looking at me like that?" it asked. I open my mouth to scream but the cat put its paws on my muffling my scream. "Shhh! Ren-chan keep it down the hollow will find us." The cat whispered. I took its paws away from my mouth. "Stop talking, How do you know my name? And how are you talking?" I whisper back.
"I know you name because you told me. And you should have said "Stop talking" last." The cat countered. "I'm not surprised that you forgot my name Ren-chan. It has been too long." I stared at the cat for a while. "What do you mean?" I asked.
"Well, you probably wouldn't believe me. So once again my name is Mesu-Raion; but you used to call me Mesu-chan. And we were best friends."


"We were friends? That's impossible. There's no way that could be true." I told the cat. She sighed sadly and folded her ears back. "I told you, you wouldn't believe me. Ren-chan I know that this is hard to take in but you and I used to play together every day. When you would have a problem with school or with one of your foster families I was always there for you. You have to trust me." Mesu-Raion mewed. I thought about it. I do remember always playing with a cat when I was little but after a while I never saw her again. Just then my body felt heavy. I grabbed Mesu-chan and jumped from the branch as soon as my feet were in the air the hollow had smashed the branch I was on. "Darn it! Keep still!" it roared. It was hitting the spots that I was in but he missed every time. I couldn't believe it a moment ago I can't outrun this thing the next we're playing "Whack a Mole". He's the hammer and I'm the mole. I could not explain it but I was much faster than I was before. I ran behind a tree. "What. Is. Going. On. Here?" I asked catching my breath. "You're using a technique that makes you go faster Ren-chan. But I can't remember what it's called." "We need to think of a plan to get out of here."
"Maybe you should split up."
"No. I don't think—"I stopped talking. I slowly turned around. The hollow was right next to me. The next thing I know; I was on the ground but so was the hollow and its eye was bleeding. I look to my left and there was a light blue stone in the shape of a pyramid. "W-what just happened?" The hollow was clutching his eye. "Grr. Damn it! You stupid brat you'll pay for that!"
Once again I grabbed Mesu-chan and ran in the opposite direction.
Ok every one here is Chapter three of my story. I still need to work on Chap. 4 so it might be a while.

* I do not own bleach. It belongs to Tite Kubo.

**Ren Zugikotsu and Mesu-Rion a.k.a Mesu-chan are my OC's

Enjoy ^-^
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Lostwings183 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
Neeeee. I need to start woking on my own stories, and put them up. In fact, I might put that one that I wrote years ago up. :3 I can't wait til you put more up!
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