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I was right. It is raining for the afternoon. I ran to my home as fast as I could. I entered my house muttering to myself. "What a way to end the day first I get picked on again, it's raining, and I'm soaked! Can it get any worse?" The lights start to flicker then they go out. "Great. I just had to say that!" I close my eyes in order sense the aura around me to find a flashlight. But there was something I did not expect to see a human shaped figure of aura.

Earlier that day
Ulquiorra's prov
This is the human that Aizen-sama wanted me to bring back to Los Notches? She is pathetic. But her Spiritual Pressure is truly amazing. If someone were to teach her how to control it she may be of use. I have been watching her for days. There is nothing special about this girl she can't even sense Spiritual Pressure. The strange thing is that this time when she left her home she hesitated for a moment and looked around as if to she felt someone watching her. Incredible. Could she feel my presence? But she couldn't have I made sure that I would not have enough Spiritual Pressure to even attract a Hollow. There is something strange about this girl.
When she left to go to this place called "School" I took the time to examine her home more closely. As I got closer to the home I felt a sudden Spiritual Pressure. This surprised me. "Hello there." A voice came from behind me.
I turned around to see a small creature. I noticed that it had a hollow hole in its chest. "You are a hollow." I said calmly. "Not really I look like a hollow but I am an aura cat. I'm surprised that you felt my presence. No not mine it was the girl's." The hollow was right. This girl must be able to maintain her Spiritual Pressure. "Who are you? I've never seen you around here before." The hollow chirps. "I have no business with trash like you." I reply coldly. "That's cold. If you going to try to get in good luck with that." Hollow tells me.
"And why is that?"
The creator laughs. "Somebody is protecting the girl. But it is the remains of his presence. He is no longer of this world."
"Who is it?"
The hollow sighs "You know for someone who says they have no business with "trash" like me; you sure ask a lot of questions."
"Gathering information is part of my mission. It is none of your concern Hollow." I replied." I'm not a hollow." the hollow whined. I focused my energy on the house. Before I realized it I was inside of the house. "It seems that girl's home is no longer being protected."
"Actually I let you let you in." The hollow informs me. I turned to look at the hollow. "You seem like I can trust you here, but if you try to hurt Ren-chan you will suffer the consequences."
"Who is this "Ren-chan" that you speak of?"
"That is what I call the girl. She's at school for now. But she will be home later in the afternoon."
I looked around the small room. It is not much just a small couch, coffee table, and a small desk. As I go up the stairs I notice the hollow following me. She is true to her word. "Are you a hollow or a human spirit?" the hollow asks me. I did not reply. When I entered the girl's room I was a little surprised. For someone who keeps to herself she had a lot of pictures. The one that caught my eye was the one on her dresser. It was small but big enough to see. I walked over to the picture and picked it up to look at it more closely. There was a small girl and a man but his face was burned off. "Hiss. Put that down!" the hollow spat. I sat the picture back down.  
"It's Ren-chan's father. He died a long time ago." The hollow told me as she jumped on the bed with her ears folded back. I felt something heavy in my chest but I ignored it. Also I noticed some kind of object it was like a table but it had some kind of keys on it. I walked over to it and pressed one of the keys. It played a small soft note. "What is this?" I ask the hollow. "It's called a piano. Humans play the keys to make a melody. Ren-chan plays it all the time." Hollow tell me in a soft voice. "Why would she do that? What is the purpose?" I ask.
"It helps Ren-chan feel better; so she isn't sad all the time. Ren-chan has been through a lot in the past few years."
"I see. I've acquired enough information. I must go."
"Alright. Will you come back soon?"
"Perhaps. If the girl proves herself useful for Aizen-sama."  
"Who's—"
I opened a portal that led back to Hueco Mondo and leapt through it leaving the hollow without hearing the rest of her question alone in the girl's home.
This is Chapter two. Sorry for the wait everyone I wanted to try to get some coments but That didn't go as planned. So here is part to please comment and rate . I hope you like it.

I do not own Bleach or it's character's they be long to Tite Kubo.
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je2 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
hey there!
I have to say, this is pretty good story, and all. Don't worry about those comments, I know somebody will comment some day ^^ And well, If you wan't to have more readers, you probaby should put this story in groups. It is better to look for the group with the necessary pairing. :)

but anyway, great job, ceep going! ^^
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the comment.How do I put the story into a group?
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je2 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
are you in group now? you need to be in group first.
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What would my story be in? Bleach wise. I love your avatar.
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je2 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
hmm.. is there any bleach fanfic group? I thinks it would be there. and if not, it could go into some "bleach fans" group. you can read those groups rules, I think the tell everyone can there put some bleach storys.
Why thank you :huggle:
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love Toshiro.And Hyorinmaru is just awsome. and Ty
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je2 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
Me too :D I like how he look like me a little. I'm short too and my hair is a little like that X'D not much 'cause toushiro has manga hair, really messy and cute :heart:
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I also like Byakuya, Kenpachi, Ulquiorra, and Grimmjow.
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Lostwings183 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
i am planning on putting up a kingdom hearts story soon.
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool. Can't wait to see it.
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Lostwings183 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
it's up if you wanna read it. :3
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