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Harmony Sage Lawrence
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Artist // Professional // Varied
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Follow Me on Facebook for different image releases! www.facebook.com/pages/Sage-of…

Or on Instagram: @temperatesage

-I am making photo retouch and color correction tutorials! Watch them here: www.youtube.com/user/gesasage8…

-I am just starting an Astrology series with horoscope dresses. Libra is up, Scorpio will be up soon, Sagittarius will be late, but keep your eyes open for them! =D

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My name is Harmony Sage Lawrence, I am a seamstress and photographer. I have been working on a sewing machine since I was 5 years old and I have been doing photography for 10 years now. I love combining my arts as you will see with my photography and clothing creation. I also edit and color correct film. =)

I try to be a pleasant person and I love to talk to other artists and art viewers! Please feel free to leave me messages, I love to hear what other see in my art. =)

Current Residence: Portland, OR (but I am really a Washingtonian in Past and Heart)
deviantWEAR sizing preference: small
Favourite genre of music: Industrial, Electronic, Trance, Ambient, New Age, Rock
Favourite photographer: girltripped, Dennis Calvert
Favourite style of art: Light Painting Photography
Operating System: PC (its what I grew up with)
Personal Quote: You can be like a rock and you can be like water, you just need to learn when.

Favourite Visual Artist
So many different styles of artists out there, I can't think of a favorite with so many kinds
Favourite Movies
Whale Rider, Let the Right One In, Bullets Over Broadway, Hot Fuzz, Tropic Thunder, Forrest Gump
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Assemblage 23, Deep Forest, E Nomine, Trance Control
Favourite Writers
Mary Oliver, Edgar Allan Poe
Favourite Games
Gabriel Knight 2 (Beast Within)
Favourite Gaming Platform
computer (though XBOX 360 is nice too)
Tools of the Trade
camera, inspiration, sewing machine, photoshop, premiere, but mostly my hands.
Other Interests
botany, camping, kayaking, photography, sewing, beading, adventure games, strategy games

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First off I want to say that the composition of the image is very good! It makes the scene feel intimate and follows the good old rule of thirds.

The catch of the otters poses is very nice and has a fun and loving feel to it.

The one area I could see some improvement for this image is in the depth of field and focus. The otter that is closest to the foreground is fairly out of focus on the face and that does reduce the impact of the image a bit. I would suggest trying to find a way to either move the depth forward a little or increase the depth of field over all to reduce that blur issue in future images.

Overall great image though! I know these things can be tough in nature photography!
Otterly Adorable
Thank you so much for the critique and in depth commenting! =D
In the Spotlight
Thank you very much for the critique! =D It is funny I was wondering if I should have left the background darker so the window sill couldn't be seen. XD
Wraith