Really? I had some trouble with that part... couldn't get it to look right. I'm glad you like it though!
So I wasn't sure about Bel's hair and eye color. What is
her hair and eye color? I first went with blue for her eyes because in Jack's perspective he says her eyes are the same color as her gown and I imagined her wearing blue, but then I went with brown just because brown seemed like a safe color.... so I guess that means the little illustration at the bottom isn't accurate.
And I have two versions of Jack (well, three actually, but one was so god awful it doesn't deserve to be mentioned). I used a photo of Gaspard Ulliel as a reference, but I couldn't get it to look like how I see Jack so I changed it... a little. Anyway, glad you like it. I'm gonna go finished commenting on those chapters now.