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I made my own brush for this one. The edges of it are a bit fractured like watery ink or paint sinking into paper. What do you think? I like the balance it creates between clearly defined sections of light and dark tones, while still letting them blend just slightly because of the crackly edges of the brush strokes.
As for the line art, I think I need to fill in more shaded areas like I have done with the coils wrapped around Gloria in the upmost panel. But I think the lines overall are a bit too thick. I'll drop down one brush size in the next page, and lower my bias for when to fill in shadowed areas. Otherwise, I like where I'm at for now.

Written adaptation (ADAPTATION!) provided by :icondamselbinder: -
"Whhhgghhmmphhh..." Gloria mumbled through her tight gag, her lips still incapable of parting or moving at all, as Echidna rushed through the air. She was held almost upside down, still drowzy and weak from the helpless pleasure Echidna had inflicted on her, her white hair no longer so perfectly neat.

"Where are we going...where is she taking me?" Gloria wondered absentmindedly as Echidna soared through the air, just over the forest canopy.
"Where is it -?" Echidna said, furious that more of her offspring were being destroyed. But she soon realised - there was a manor house a few hundred metres from her, its walls rang with the sounds of swordplay. "There you are, you foul human!" Echidna said, and began to fly towards it.

But she paused. She looked back at Gloria, dangling limply in her coils, the proud and feisty warrior reduced to submissive defeat. Echidna relished the sight, and longed to have her hands on Gloria's smooth, dark skin once again. But she was not just disappointed that she could not indulge herself further - Gloria was a concern now. Could she still fight effectively with her tail wrapped around the full-bosomed damsel?
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Docyol Featured By Owner May 15, 2017
I can just Echidna's dilemma. Save her children or make more whoopie with unconscious lady 
googum Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
Great work on the skin toning. The perfect level of gloss.
That one shoulder in the last panel does so much for me!
jasoncypher Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
i honestly thought lol that plant was gonna plant seed inside gloria 
jenweasley Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
Great job! Can't wait for more!
Damselbinder Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Oooh, very nice indeed. A nice, action-y page, to contrast with the more intimate stuff we've seen with Gloria recently. She does look completely overwhelmed, I have to say: almost like she's gone limp in Echidna's grip.
ArielSzataria Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
The brush is great for the art style, so nice work :)
As for the shading, the amount is fine but your light source seems like it has two angles on the bottom panel. Left side (The straight part) The light's above it and right side (The coil) It's to the upper right. The shade from the coil on the straight part is also angled pretty steeply and is straight.

Loving the comic so far. It has a very 'Ecci' feel without being overdone or blatant. Not an easy thing to do, so nice work :)
Telikor Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, in the last panel, I wanted the light to be creeping in from all angles, just along the edges of the silhouette, because she's being held up in front of the bright sky. I don't know if I pulled it off yet.
megasonicmanlover Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
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