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Gloria finds her bearings as a dark shadow looms overhead...

Sorry it's taken so very long, but I now have three pages to submit at once! But I still want all your commenting love! (I like comments)
And I'll just say, I did get a number of comments and notes asking about my progress on this page, and that's fine, I'm happy people anticipate it, but a couple of the notes were a bit abusive actually! I know it's been a while, but you don't know what I have going on in life I have to work around! Because I haven't told you! Because it's none of your business! So to those few people (you know who you are) Don't think your whining had anything to do with these next three pages coming out together. They are not for you, they are for everyone else.

Written adaptation (ADAPTATION!) provided by :icondamselbinder: -
Gloria was caught in a thick, powerful tendril, pale green and scaly like the body of a monstrous serpent. It was wrapped tightly around Gloria's lower body, holding her in place
"Around its prey..." she thought, the serpentine comparison making her feel very much like a quivering rabbit in the grip of a snake. She wiggled her shapely body, straining with all the strength she could muster, but it accomplished nothing. She was trapped.

It was just as she was realising that escape was impossible when it occurred to Gloria that the coils did not end at the point where they ceased to bind her. Her pale blue eyes followed the tail up and up and up. When she saw what lay at the monster's head, a gasp escaped her lips, and her eyes widened with fear.
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Damselbinder Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
An excellent sense of struggle conveyed here. As in that Makoto pic, the way she bares her neck to us as she wriggles around really gets the sense across of how vulnerable Gloria is.

The coils are drawn very well. The thickness and strength of them is clear, and it makes a great contrast to how slender and delicate Gloria looks, as she squirms helplessly in Echidna's grasp.
Twister548 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
I like this. Great Job :)
You use photoshop?
Telikor Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
googum Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
i love her reflective looking skin! you really get a good sense of the shape chest! and nothing like final expression to get me excited for the next page!
jackmackhack Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
And so it continues~ :D

I'm a big fan of *coil* peril, so seeing a voloptious *little* tart like Luxria getting wrapped up in these coils twice as thick as her waist? It sorta conveys to you that she's JUUUUST not going to be getting out of that grasp. Frail femininity is contrasted with monstrous strength!

I also like how she slowly is waking up, and growing shocked at what she sees. What DOES she see? Is it scary? Is she going to like it? Why do I get the feeling that the answer is a big fat no? =P

Might I also mention that in the 2nd panel you drew her with the most BEAUTIFUL lips? ;) You just wanna slap some tape over em~
Telikor Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Her name is Gloria by the way. This video tells you pretty much everything you need to know about her [link]
Luxuria is just the name of the comic. It is Latin for the deadly sin "Lust".
jackmackhack Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
oh whoops =P You DID tell me all about this awhile ago, didn't you? I guess I just dun goofed!

...and all I *need* to know about her? (watches the video).

...XD You know Shibaji, there's something hilarious about a woman explaining a female character based on a video like that! (I will admit, it's a nice video ;) good eyes!)
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