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Page one is here, I hope you like it. Gloria has found herself in a bit of a predicament.
I'm going to be experimenting a great deal in terms of colouring and style in these pages. Let me know what you think!

Written adaptation (ADAPTATION!) provided by :icondamselbinder: -
"Mmmmphh!" A muffled cry escaped the soft, pink lips of a beautiful young woman. Her pale eyes were wide, her white hair stuck straight up into the air. Her eyes were fixed straight in front of her, seemingly entranced by what lay before them. "Mmmmmm-mmpphh!" Again, a muffled sound of protest came forth from her. For her lips were not visible. They had been covered by what looked like a strip of white tape. For all intents and purposes this was what it was - it stuck fast to the young woman's lips, covering her mouth completely, gagging her.

Indeed, the woman - Gloria by name - was gagged, deliberately prevented from being able to speak. For she had been captured, and reflected in her pale eyes was the image of her captor, whose own eyes bore the reflection of the white-haired damsel she had ensnared. An inhuman creature had caught her, a demonic being of considerable power. From the hips up, it bore the semblance of a woman, with teal skin, interrupted by red markings along her body. Instead of hair, she had two long, prehensile tendrils. Some parts of her were covered in thick, brown, organic armour, and her eyes were blank, like a blind man's. The creature could see all too well, though, and she was looking straight at her captive. The creature's name? Echidna.

"Such a pretty thing..." the creature said in a high pitched voice. There was a slight rumbling as it moved, for below her waist, Echidna was truly demonic, with a long, thick serpent's tail instead of legs. It was as if her humanoid body were a flower blooming from the top of the tail. Fittingly, she had some power over vegetation and plants: even the gag with which she had sealed her captive's lips was plant matter. She smiled slowly, her red lips remaining closed, as she put her hand on the back of her captive's neck, as if in a gesture of affection.

"Mph!" Gloria gave a quiet squeal as the felt the creature's fingers touching her slender neck and the hair of her head which remained sticking straight up. Or rather, straight down. For the creature's reflection in Gloria's wide, fearful eyes was reversed: the damsel was hanging upside down, suspended in the air. It was telling that Echidna's hand gripped Gloria only lightly. She had no need to handle her roughly: the voluptuous maiden was already completely under her domination.
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ala33 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice eyes.
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HeySerdna Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
You're is (to me), under appreciated! Well done. Great series! :)
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googum Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Gloria is such as confident and teasing character. It makes it all the tastier when she's finally found herself in such a desperate situation. Thumbs up!
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alltiedup8 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
whoa, awesome job with the whole eye reflection--subtle yet obvious way of saying someone else is here.

oh dear me, now they've got the tape out....hrm...
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Damselbinder Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
Oh, man, Gloria looks stunning here. The wide-eyed look, the tape gag, the fact that you can see her gasp underneath it...amazing. I love the way that the monster (Chimaera?) looks like it's inspecting the dangling babe.
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Telikor Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The monster is a boss character from Devil May Cry 4. Her name is Echidna (who I think was the mother of all monsters in Greek mythology. Possibly Roman. I'm uncertain)
And the tentacled monsters that hatch from her seeds are called Chimera (because they attatch themselves to other enemies in the game).
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jackmackhack Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011
My my my~ what a lovely reflection. Now she can see just how purty and scared she is!

I like it! I wait eagerly for another!
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The-Miho-chan Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
flawless.. fantastic awesome work is the first thing I thought, great pic, nice work.
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Parasyte123 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011
Nice perspectives with the reflections!
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Telikor Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I wasn't too sure about them. A bit confusing I thought.
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jackmackhack Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
It helps that you made a pretty big contrast between their respective eyes.

Monster gal: Blank and milky white
Human gal: Textured, detailed despite reflection


...though where did this monster find duct tape? :confused:
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Telikor Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, the idea is this and the next page will be setting the scene, then the story rewinds back to Gloria's actions leading up to her capture. Eventually we'll get up to where it started, and keep going from there.
At one point in the catch-up, Echidna (big monster lady) grows a bunch of plants that all plop out an organic duct tape type stuff for no reason but I like tape gags.
What do you say to that?
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jackmackhack Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
*organic duct tape dispensers*

This is dangerously relevant to my interests. It's potentially catastrophic how much I approve of this concept!


This sounds like a good way to go about it pacing wise. It offers a good quick tease, then exposition on the actual capture (which IS important), then finally developing to more detailed capture/torment details. I love it!
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Telikor Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just discovered that while upside down, thanks to our good friend gravity, we can see Gloria's bum! I will have some fun with this...
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jackmackhack Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011
Isn't gravity such a swell fellow? :D
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Telikor Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not to mention the DMC team. Must love their... "conservative" views on costume design.
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