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Alone at the Bottom
250 meters down, Amber rested near the bottom. Her face adorned with a blank expression as a few stray bubbles left her tightly sealed lips. Far above her, soldiers trained with scuba gear, and swam laps across the pool.
She was alone.....alone with her thoughts, suspended in an airless state. She admired the quietness, and the tightness In her chest. She closed her eyes, felt the first contractions in her chest, and smiled.
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Literature
Ice Bath
She sat motionless as the world grew silent around her. She breathed deep to calm her body and mind, and to prepare for the task at hand. Her breathing was almost trance like in it’s steadiness.
She placed a hand on her diaphragm and toned chest, feeling them sink and hollow beneath her hand with each exhale, and grow to massive proportions with each inhale. She knew that her body needed to be calm, and her mind clear.
In total.....10 minutes had passed since the start of her meditation, and her mind was now completely void of thought. She opened her eyes and breathed deeply in through her nose, before finally rising to her feet; this left only 2 more steps.
She reached up and one at a time undid the straps on her tight black and yellow one piece swimsuit, and let it fall to the floor; revealing her goddess like physique of sizable breasts and visible bricks of muscles.
She stepped forward until she reached the edge of the tub; staring down at the ice filled water that light refl
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Literature
Paladin of the Dark
Behind me stands an army of the damned
Unholy knights in black that wage war against the legions of hell
I stand among them.....a paladin of the dark.....an instrument of His will
Cast upon this Earth to wage war against the heretics and non believers
And to drag them into the light
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Literature
Whack a Mole
Approximately 18 hours ago, a mole was revealed to have infiltrated the ranks of the Eden Corporation. This mole had access to the original strain of the G34-76 virus, and now plans on selling it to terrorist arms dealers, in an attempt to make the ultimate chemical weapon. We've tracked the mole to a multi story apartment complex. Your job is to find the mole, and secure the stolen samples of the virus. Civilians will be present in the building, and should be treated as non hostile, and should not be harmed. Good luck team.....
The helicopter hovered over the building......bringing sound to an otherwise quiet night.
Cody: Comm check everyone
Crosshair: Crosshair.....locket and loaded
Sawbones: Sawbones......ready to play
Jackal: Jackal......ready to party
Seyfore: (sound of a large LMG bolt being racked)
Hawke: Drop zone in sight......weapons free boys.
Cody: Drinks on me if we make it out of here
Jackal: Your mistake kid
All: (laugh)
The helicopter touched down, and we all filed out.
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Literature
The Blaze
A man stood by the shore
As the sand was swallowed by waves
The man clutched a rose
The life he couldn't save
He tossed the rose into the waves
And watched the growing blaze
The entire ocean consumed
By the ever growing flame
Then the man and flames were gone
As fast as they came
Leaving the sand to be consumed
By the crashing waves
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Literature
Slaughter House (Aftermath)
I walked towards the now abandoned anthro night club......hands buried deep inside my pockets........they were all still there......
The cat girl still lay pinned to the ground.....my sword protruding from her back......her eyes still wide with fear.
I gently placed my hand on her face and shut her eyelids......I removed my sword, and her body slumped back down to the ground.......strange......
She almost looked peaceful......
I slung her body over my shoulder and continued towards the nightclub.
Once inside I spent almost 2 hours fashioning over 42 makeshift graves.....I placed the cat girl in the last grave, and placed a rose on top.
On both exits I placed barriers.......small pieces of paper that create deadly walls of dark energy.....
Anyone attempting to enter would be turned to string cheese.
As I stood outside the club I bowed my head and said a quick prayer....
"In the sweat of thy face shalt thou eat bread, till thou return unto the ground; for out of it wast thou taken: for d
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Literature
Project Jericho
"Ladies, and gentlemen.....our war against the forces of the damned and the corrupt have been met with nothing but success......however we tend to take the next step in our fight against the freaks."
"Utilizing the G34-76 virus as well as DNA from a multitude of demonic entities ......we have created a new breed of soldier."
"These soldiers will not be prone to human error......they will follow orders without question.......even if it costs them their life."
"They do not fear......they do not feel......they walk on leaving only death and bullet shells in their path."
"They are true killing machines."
The audience breaks into an applause.....but soon stops.
"We have already produced more than 1,000 units for deployment......with more in development.
Soldiers stand on the stage in dark combat armor.......red eyes gleam through helmet visors. They speak in a strange tongue.......in a demonic tone
"Rednammoc sredro ruoy tiawa ew"
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I was wondering if anyone wanted to RP with my extreme diver and breathholding girl Amber (also known as Stitches)

She follows orders like a soldier and knows how to look sexy when without air

A mini story is in my character folder, under the name Stitches
Well, considering I am running out of ways to represent my characters, as well as lacking any way of showing scenes other than writing, I feel that I should probably try to use Kisekae again.

My only concern is actually learning the program. So many complex paths and uncoordinated menus to navigate.

To top it off, I feel that I would constantly be getting frustrated because of how slow and tedious the process is of both making and learning the program.


Considering some of complex ideas I have for how my characters should look, I feel it will be quite difficult.

However because I specifically wanted to promote more RPs with my diving and breathholding girl Amber......I feel having more than just a “closeup shot” would be good.

#Stitches #Amber #Kisekae #Kisekae2 #Laziness/lackofconfidence
Well, considering I am running out of ways to represent my characters, as well as lacking any way of showing scenes other than writing, I feel that I should probably try to use Kisekae again.

My only concern is actually learning the program. So many complex paths and uncoordinated menus to navigate.

To top it off, I feel that I would constantly be getting frustrated because of how slow and tedious the process is of both making and learning the program.


Considering some of complex ideas I have for how my characters should look, I feel it will be quite difficult.

However because I specifically wanted to promote more RPs with my diving and breathholding girl Amber......I feel having more than just a “closeup shot” would be good.
Well, considering I am running out of ways to represent my characters, as well as lacking any way of showing scenes other than writing, I feel that I should probably try to use Kisekae again.

My only concern is actually learning the program. So many complex paths and uncoordinated menus to navigate.

To top it off, I feel that I would constantly be getting frustrated because of how slow and tedious the process is of both making and learning the program.


Considering some of complex ideas I have for how my characters should look, I feel it will be quite difficult.

However because I specifically wanted to promote more RPs with my diving and breathholding girl Amber......I feel having more than just a “closeup shot” would be good.

#Stitches #Amber #Kisekae #Kisekae2 #Laziness/lackofconfidence
250 meters down, Amber rested near the bottom. Her face adorned with a blank expression as a few stray bubbles left her tightly sealed lips. Far above her, soldiers trained with scuba gear, and swam laps across the pool.

She was alone.....alone with her thoughts, suspended in an airless state. She admired the quietness, and the tightness In her chest. She closed her eyes, felt the first contractions in her chest, and smiled.
Alone at the Bottom
Amber lies at the bottom of the training pool, alone with her thoughts
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I was wondering if anyone wanted to RP with my extreme diver and breathholding girl Amber (also known as Stitches)

She follows orders like a soldier and knows how to look sexy when without air

A mini story is in my character folder, under the name Stitches

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Kobraking14 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey
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tbartosiewicz Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2018
Whoa hey!
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Kobraking14 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, sorry I haven’t talked in awhile 
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tbartosiewicz Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2018
It’s ok sir ^w^
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SB1991 Featured By Owner May 27, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are you still there? You haven't responded back through notes for a whole day and I kept sending you the same note. What's going on? Are you alive?
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SB1991 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll try to message you later tonight. I'm not sure if I'm hit with this Net Neutrality stuff or my phone isn't working
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tbartosiewicz Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2018
It’s been happening to several people actually
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GrayComputer Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the Watch! :D ^^ ^-^ ^o^ ^_^ ^O^ ^0^ :heart: :hug:
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tbartosiewicz Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018
Das a lot a faces 0-0
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TerminatorJackKnife Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2018
Send this to everyone you want to stay in touch within 2018 and beyond
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