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        Draco stared at the staff table in disbelief.

        "Say what?!" He asked, his voice echoing through the silent Great Hall.

        "Mr. Malfoy...If you would please relocate yourself to the Gryffindor table." Professor Dumbledor smiled kindly and gestured to the empty seat to the left of Harry. Draco stood slowly, his face burning with embarrasment and confusion. He felt hundres of eyes boring into him as he made his way over to the table. Sighing, he looked down at Harry.

        "Mind if I sit here?" He asked quietly.

        "I guess not..." Harry said, and Draco took note of the pink tinge across his cheeks and the bridge of his nose.

        "Thanks..."Draco said, sitting. He saw Weasly and Granger's shocked looks and quickly looked down at the table.

        "Wtih that all said and done, tuck in!" Dumbledor said and all of the golden plates filled with food. Draco sat quietly contemplating something while everyone else piled up their plates. A quiet voice brought him back to reality.

        "Malfoy..." Harry said quietly.

        "Yeah?" Draco said, completely lacking his sneer.

        "Are you gonna eat anything?" He asked.

        "Nah...I'm ok..."He said not looking up,"I think I'll just go to the common room."

        "But...you don't know the way there."

        "Then could you show me?" Draco put a small sneer in.

        "Sure..." Harry said slowly. He stood up and Draco followed him out of the room. Draco felt the eyes of every Gryffindor follow him out of the hall.

        "Why did they do this?" Draco asked Harry, as though Harry knew the answer.

        "Like I know..." Harry answered,"Maybe...maybe your father..."

        "Shit! My father! What am I gonna do?" Draco put his hands on his forehead and shook his head.

        "You could...make him blieve your still in Slytherin..."

        /That...that just might work! Father isn't all that smart is he? I mean...he's a death eater...God! I'm so desperate, I'm taking advice from Potter!/ Draco looked up at Harry, who looked at him strange.

        "You're not all that stupid, Potter!" He said, a gleeful look in his eyes. Harry blushed lightly and a confused look crossed his features, as though he wasn't sure wehter to take it as an insult or a complement.

        "So...How shall we go about it?" Draco asked, and Harry snapped back to reality.

        "Excuse me, but did you just say we?" Harry asked disbelivingly.

        "Of course, Potter! You're the brains of this outfit!" He said as though Harry was the most stupid thing alive.

        "Since when? You're the one who's trying to fool your father!"

        "But you came up with the idea! Therefore, you're the brains! C'mon! It's logic!"

        "And what kind of logic is that?"

        "Malfoy logic!"

        "That's why I didn't understand..."

        "Sod off! Just help me with this...Surely you don't want me dead..." Draco said with an air of false hope.

        "Shut up, Malfoy! Fine, I'll help you! But, you can't tell anyone!" Harry threatened.

        "You suck at threats...Lets go up to the dorms and talk about this there." Draco said, prinning widly. Harry rolled his eyes and nodded, leading Draco the rest of the way to the common room.

~*TIME CHANGE*~

        Draco stepped into the common room and looked around.

        "What?" Harry asked while flopping down on one of the chairs by the fire.

        "It's scarlet..." Draco said, looking around with a strange expression on his face.

        "Yeah...what did ya expect...rainbow?" Harry asked,"We're not gay up here."

        Draco gave him a look that Harry could not describe. The look faded, and Draco recovered.

        "You're not?" He asked in a mixture of innocence and sarcasm.

        "Of...of course I'm not!" Harry stuttered.

        "Sure, sure! Whatever! Now...how will we pull off operation 'Daddy's a Dumbass'?"

        "Come up with a name have you?" Harry raised an eyebrow.

        "Uh-huh!" Draco nodded with very un-Draco happiness.

        "Oh, God!" Harry shook his head,"How did I get roped into this...oh...right...the 'Malfoy logic'!"
Draco has an interesting dream involving Harry and Harry recieves a mysterious letter from draco...will the two eventually lead them to their true loves?
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VampireIllusion Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009   Writer
Operation "Daddy is a dumbass" *sniggers* Where the hell do you get these ideas? Man, you make Draco so OOC and that's what makes it funny :giggle:
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Tasan Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009
I know my Draco sucks. I wrote it over 4 years ago.
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VampireIllusion Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009   Writer
Your Draco doesn't suck! He's just sort of OOC. He's different, and different is good :D If there is anything I would change if I were you, it would be the little to almost no denial Draco fights with. I think you should have explored that more instead of making Draco and Harry accept each other almost on the spot. And maybe I'd change how Ron reacts. He's well-known for his temper, and he seemed to have a really mild reaction when he found out about H.and D. Anyway, it's still good, you just need to work a little more on it :)
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Tasan Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
I don't plan on working on this much more. I started to and then life caught up with me. I'm taking fairly difficult classes in college and unfortunately have no time to work on anything from the past...or anything new for that matter *sigh*. Not to mention, since I just wrote it for fun and it was a kind of joke between my friends and I when I was in high school, the drive to re-write it is nil. I appreciate the crit! Even when I play Draco in RP's he ends up incredibly OOC, and it drives me crazy. My draco in an RP ran into some rough problems, and for some reason that personality stuck...I've tried so many times to make him like he is in the books, and each time fail miserably XP. Ah well...

The improved version is on my DA page, if you wanna give them a look.
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VampireIllusion Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009   Writer
I did give them a look. And it's fine if you don't improve it :). I just read these kinds of stories for the fun of it and sorry if my crit was kinda rough ^^" Criticism is what I do best, after all ;)
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Tasan Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
Nah it wasn't rough. I go back and read it now and just go "Oh hell, was I actually that bad?" lol. I write for NaNoWriMo now when i get the time and for fun with a friend of mine, and even now I know I have tons of improvement to do. But oh well...lol. Such is the curse of being a science major. No time to do the artsy fartsy side of stuff XP
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VampireIllusion Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009   Writer
Yeah, even though I have lots of time to write and do stuff like that I still think I have much to improve. Maybe if you read my story, you'd see what I'm talking about. I'm not a native English speaker, so I tend to make lots of mistakes and I'm a perfectionist, so that kinda makes me wanna stop writing altogether because I'm not good enough. :sigh: I hope you never give up art, though. It's the thing that gives sense to life, or that's how I feel at least. I'd have gone mad if it wasn't for art :). Just write more and your skills will improve with time.:D
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Tasan Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
I know. Lol. It's the time I'm lacking. I'll try to though. XP
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xxDragonflyzxx Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2008  Student Filmographer
*laughs ass off* that was funny
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Esme-Silver Featured By Owner May 12, 2008
Yeah...what did ya expect...rainbow?" Harry asked,"We're not gay up here."
Classic!!!
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snakie-person Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
Awwwww! poor Draco! i can just picture the look that he had on his face when Harry said, "i'm not gay", IF ONLY! :'(
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yamibakurasgal Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2008
hee hee you can't argue with the Malfoy Logic XD!And yes,daddy is a dumbass!
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Rachxc Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2008
lol@ Operation Daddy's A Dumbass.
genius, I tell you.
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ruffles-meet-frills Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2007
thats so sweet.... :hug:
you made my day!
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Snyper-mara Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2006
ROFL. that is all i can say......
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PeanutButterOreoCook Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006
lmao...Malfoy logic! I love it.
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sXe-freak-show Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2004   Writer
Haha...that's great!
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