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Rain can be so beautiful,
But itís often misunderstood.
Even though it makes cold and wet,
I still tilt back my hood.

Just to see the color of the clouds,
And how the drops reflect the light.
To feel heavenís tears on my skin,
Beyond the wet and chilly bite.

I stand there in the whipping hail,
And in the gloomy gray of rain.
With crows perched on the treetops,
The only witnesses to this pain.

And when they sky stops crying,
And the sun dares peek once more,
An even greater wonder happens,
In the wake of the last downpour.

An implosion that takes an eternity,
Yet happens there at once.
Colors reflecting every mood,
Red, blue, green, gold, bronze.

A rainbow across the aching sky,
Someone put it there for me.
To make me smile and make me laugh,
For every man with sight to see.

And voices beside me rose,
Like thunder coming through.
Complaining that the rainbow,
Was in the way of their view.

And I will never forgive those humans,
Who taught those children to say,
That something that was made for them,
Could ever be in their way.

So the next time you see a rainbow,
Don't complain about the view.
Someone wanted to lighten up your rain,
And put it there for you.
Had to write this as a homework assignment.

Liked it enough to post it.

the picture sucks because it was more of a way to make sure my tablet was actually working again.


mediums: word, PSCS, tablet + mouse
time: 20 mins (poem), 45 mins (picture)
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Ridemus Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009
Very deep, very beautiful, very everything. Loved it. (Not surprising it coming from your page)
atiy Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2006
i'm happy i took time to read that. it was veary good.
Tanize Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2006  Student Digital Artist
I'm happy you took the time to comment on it. Thank you. :hug:
SunSong Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
very beautiful....
Tanize Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2005  Student Digital Artist
thank you. :heart:
SunSong Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
yw :hug: :glomp:
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