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Black white wall

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This was made for my best friend :)
she wanted a new one, so i made it :D

nothing special, i know, but i like it ^^;

Credits:
Face: sxc.hu
nebula & effect stocks by =Moonchilde-Stock
textile texture by ~teatoo
paint/milkstock [link]
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hi Tatjana,

I like this work a lot. It is well composed and has a good amount of negative space which makes it a perfect wallpaper.

Actually I don't have much critique here. There are a few areas that could use some additional work, but nothing major. For example the milk on the left eye could have been blended more accurately. What bothers me a bit is that the net is above and behind the milk in some places, yet it doesn't look very convincing if it was intended.
Also, it would be cool if the milk wasn't transparent above her eye and perhaps it could also throw a shadow on her face for a better 3d-feeling.

The background is nice, but with some more complex forms and details it could be a lot more interesting. That is just a suggestion.

The whole thing appears a little random because it doesn't really have a theme or a message. That would certainly be something that could be improved as well.