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AXE Anarchy by TamasGaspar AXE Anarchy by TamasGaspar
Two version of an ad illustration for AXE via Egger Grey [link].
Which one do you prefer...?
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:iconavitavit:
AvitAvit Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
the second is funnier LOL
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Professional
I think so... ;)
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:iconjinxxed0:
Jinxxed0 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student General Artist
The scooter so that there's a chance the bunnies will survive, lol
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:iconmalamutevisp:
malamutevisp Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
This is amazing! :D
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:iconamenarae:
Amenarae Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the second better~ The guy with the scooter just feels more likely to do that. And I think it's just funnier~
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:iconj-victor:
J-VICTOR Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Student General Artist
BOTH! RSRS
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:iconmelelel:
Melelel Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
the second is funnier which is more appropriate with an absurd concept like this. We can't see how fit the guy with the jacket is... no reason to believe she'd go for him.
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OktoberKaze Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Guy with beard. black jacket makes him stand out
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Professional
Thanks Jaxon - I agree... ;)
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:iconoktoberkaze:
OktoberKaze Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Not sure if creepy ...:iconnotsureifplz:
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:iconwitismydog:
witismydog Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student General Artist
I like the top one. My eyes flows better in it then the bottom.
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
Me too... ;)
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:iconartigas:
Artigas Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
The first. For sure!
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional
Obrigado Sérgio! :)
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:icontanlammy:
tanlammy Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
First one. IMHO, the guy in the black leather jacket + his unique silhouette pops out more and his gesture leads me to look at the girl (eye flow), whereas in the 2nd one, both the lady and the scooter guy kinda blended into the background (due to same colour tone --- and to be honest, scooter guy didn't look as special as the biker guy :)).
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blAAAzzeUPp504 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Scooter fo show
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joltinjohnnylucas Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
The scooter is funnier.
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SpectralShimmer Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like both of these. The layout is nice and I love the color schemes but I would have to lean toward the bottom piece more. The top doesn't feel right for a few reasons.
1. The black jacket and bike together are a large negative space that steals your attention away from the scene as a whole and throws of the balance. They are just too heavy.
2. I agree with lonevulture that the biker does look rather stiff. He looks like he's raising a leg as a motorcycle passes by. The bottom piece LOOKs like the guy just jumped off of the scooter.
3. The contrast in outfits and the colors of the outfits also play a big part here. The bottom piece leaves you with a warmer feeling of the romantic, young, soon-to-be couple. They aren't from two worlds as far apart as she and the biker might be. Also, the goofy nerd on the scooter seems more comical than the biker adding to the overall light hearted feel.

Both pieces are very nice. Like I said I love the colors, but you may want a little more contrast between background and foreground as the two seem to blend together a little too much for an advertisement that is meant to catch the eye. I especially love the stylized look. Great work.
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lonevulture Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
The bottom. The black of the jacket in the top attracts attention, but the bottom is more harmonious. The line from the leather jacket to his left leg makes the biker's stance appear too stiff and awkward.

The bottom pic also feels like a stronger concept; it feels like the nerdier guy really might do something like that at the site of a beautiful woman. It plays on the fact that most guys have felt that way about one girl at some point; it's easier to relate to that I believe would be more appealing to a potential buyer. The biker version feels like it's saying that you're less in control, you're less the wild character that could handle a situation.

My two cents. Spend 'em however you like.
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lonevulture Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
*sight of a beautiful woman.

*it's easier to relate to; that, I believe, would be more appealing. . .

I have a brain, it's just in OFF mode.
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
For me, it works best as the two of them together. Sort of shows that AXE works in any case. :)
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:iconsasabralic:
SasaBralic Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
I like the bottom one a bit better :)
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:iconumhada:
umhada Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
I'd suggest using the guy on the bottom because I don't like the goatee. We're allowed to have insignificant opinions.
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
Well, on one hand your opinions are significant for me, but on the other hand the client's word counts only indeed. ;)
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greenhair Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
The first one
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
Thanks! :)
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Xaizhoran Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
I honestly prefer the first one WAY more, but the 2nd one makes more sense to me in terms of which of the men would be more likely to live there (judging from the other people in the picture) and the colour scheme. In the first one, my eye doesn't necessarily draw to the woman or the guy losing his bike and I immediately took in the entire scene, but with the second one, I immediately focused on the woman and disregarded everything else going on in the picture :x
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:iconarm01:
arm01 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I like the Motorcycle Biker better :) You sure do have a very awesome style. Love it!
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
Me too Armando, thank you! :)
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:iconartoftas:
artoftas Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
A kék pólósat a fekete mocival..bár a valóságban a fiatal vékony srácok inkább robogóval vannak...hiányzik nekem a körvonal róla. A bőrdzsekis elég megfáradt kövér öreg... :)
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TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
Álljon meg a gyalogmenet, variálni nem ér! :)
A szereplők kora és kondíciója adott volt (menet közben gondolta meg magát a kedves ügyfél), a háttérelemek körvonalainak elhagyása pedig tudatos lépés eredménye, a választott stílus része. ;)
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artoftas Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Jaja. :) Értem én csak a kék moci kicsit elveszik a képen. De sztem az a jobb akkor is.
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TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional
Rendben és köszönöm! :)
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:iconbachterman:
bachterman Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
igazából a kettő keverékét. a robogót, bőrdzsekivel, és krémszínű gatyóval. és kicsit jobban borulás közben, pl az első kereke legyen keresztben. szerintem a "dinamizmus" vonalból is elég lenne kevesebb. :)
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
:D Látom valakinek nagyon beindult a fantáziája... :D
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:iconbachterman:
bachterman Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
tehetek is róla, ha ilyen inspirálóak a rajzaid?
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Professional
Természetesen nem, mindez az én hibám... ;)
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:iconbachterman:
bachterman Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
arigato! :)
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:iconmaraxor:
Maraxor Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Upper one, surely. The biker letting og of his hog is something, some hipster letting go of his moped isn't realy.
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
:D:D:D
Thanks Stefan!
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:iconborderwalker:
Borderwalker Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Photographer
I think the top one is the more striking image, but I like the bottom one better because I think the scooter would do less injury to the animals ;)
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
Ah, finally someone sympathizes with the victims! :)
Takk Martine! :bow:
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shiramonderer Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
The bottom one
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
Thanks Shira! :)
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tsabszy Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012   Digital Artist
alsó! egyetértek 'cuervoscuro' üzenetével.
"AXE makes you a casanova even if you ride a scooter wearing a pink helmet"

amúgy nagyon szép ez a vektoros, steril hangulat! gratula!
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TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
:D:D:D
Mint kiderült, ő elkötelezett AXE fogyasztó - ez persze mit sem von le magvas gondolatai értékéből... :D
Köszi! :)
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Deimos-Remus Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I think the top guy creates more visual contrast as well, with his jacket being darker. It solidifies the composition even more, even if both are the same.

Great job as usual!
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TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional
Good point Nathan, thank you! :bow:
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:icondeimos-remus:
Deimos-Remus Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
No problem! Keep up the awesome work!
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:icontamasgaspar:
TamasGaspar Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional
:bow::bow::bow:
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