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Ich wollte dir nur schnell mitteilen, wie grandios ich dein Liberi-Projekt finde, auch wenn du das sicher nicht zum ersten Mal hörst. Ich bin ganz verknallt in Zurui, was ziemlich merkwürdig ist, weil er so merkwürdig ist, aber dennoch. Bomber ist einfach nur liebenswert und Kuruna ist ein toller Hauptcharakter. Band 2 fand ich zwar streckenweise ziemlich gruselig, aber dennoch: Weiter so (bitte)! (Gerade war ich ganz deprimiert zu lesen, dass es nur drei Bände geben wird.O__Q)
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Tamasaburo09| Traditional Artist
Danke für's Lesen und freut mich, dass es dir gefallen hat.
Liberi-Projekt ist sehr unbekannt, daher bekomme ich nicht häufig Feedback, also danke auch dafür ^^°

Die Produktion bei Carlsen unter dem Titel "Das Liberi-Projekt" wird mit 3 Bänden abgeschlossen, aber ich werde via Eigenproduktion die Geschichte weiter stricken.
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Fantastisch, das freut mich so, ich liebe die Geschichte sehr. Ich habe Band 1 jetzt bestimmt schon dreimal gelesen und war jedes Mal begeistert. Ich werde sie fleißig weiterempfehlen, sie verdient mehr Aufmerksamkeit!<3
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The-Psychonaut|Student Filmographer
About that name you're after? Here's some advice:

1)Think about what the subject is for your comic.

In Frank Cho's comic the subject is the misadventures of the residents of Liberty Meadows, so, it's called 'Liberty Meadows'. In 'Flash Gordon' the titular character is also the lead in the comics. In 'Little Nemo' it's Little Nemo. Who's the main character or main focus of the story? 

 If you can't figure out the title, it's because you, likely, haven't decided what the main focus of the story is. If it's a person like Will Hunting in 'Goodwill Hunting' then that's the premise. If it's something more abstract like 'Pulp Fiction', where the story is about turning pulp fiction tropes on their heads, then that's the premise. 

2)Give your characters a goal that defines an ongoing story. 
'The hunt for red october' is about chasing a russian submarine. 'The maltese falcon' is about the maltese falcon. 'The treasure of the sierra madre' is about what else but the treasure? 'Kill Bill' is about, well, killing a guy named Bill. 

3)Give your story a problem that needs solving.
'The Hustler' is about a pool shark obsessed with beating a bigger fish. 'Shawshank Redemption' is about a guy busting outtuh jail. 'No country for old men' is about a world-weary sheriff following a traveling fight between a psychopath and a greedy ex-marine. 
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The-Psychonaut|Student Filmographer
 I wanted to watch 'Overlord', but I ended up here; and then I couldn't leave. Your stuff's pretty good, very reminiscent of Bill Waterson's work. I like the non-conformist little girl, she's adorably contrarian and her animation is darling. The boys are thoughtful and funny, too. Everything here's pretty apolitical and more snarky about esoterical or existential things. I like that; it makes for a refreshing escape from all the bullshit. 
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Tamasaburo09| Traditional Artist
'Overlord'? Oh boy. How did your search for that show lead you here?
I love 'Overlord', by the way. It's very entertaining.

Anyways, thanks for your feedback, I'm glad, that you took your time to read and like my comic.
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The-Psychonaut|Student Filmographer
I just reinstated my funimation account and I had it in one tab, but I was between shows so I started favoring deviantart posts and I stumbled on your comic. Couldn't say how. I guess my preference for more expressionistic animation just lead me to a favorites gallery with your stuff in it.

 I like it well enough. I just wish Momonga had two things: 1)Either a ticking clock or a productive and well-established end goal (he really has neither); and 2)More of a relationship with his PC's. The intimacy of an obedient servant to their master goes back all the way to LOTR ('Mister Frodo!' 'Sam!'). It's very common for servants to become members of a family, and it would be interesting to see these servants struggle with being ideal slaves, anticipating their master's will, while becoming ideal officers under a general, eventually becoming his companions. 

 Oh, that's just because I have twitchy fingers and too much time on my hands; I overthink everything. But I like giving constructive feedback. The one thing I can't stand in a comment section is just seeing an endless train of 'LOL's!'. They're gratifying, I know, but they don't explain why something works or doesn't. 
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