I love how this turned out.
I love what you did with the fabric, that pattern on her clothes is beautiful.
I do not agree about "harsh" lines clashing with the colors though. There are different forms of art. One is drawing, and in drawing lines can get a lot of attention. And your linework deserves that attention! You just keep looking for what you think works.
This one gives a bit of that old European comic book feel, like Buddy Longway. Is it mainly watercolors, or are there some markers in there as well? I love this combination with your lines. Well, what can I say, I love good linework.