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Secrets of Cavanal Hill
Prologue
Alyssa looked at the 2 coffins of Fred and Yanny Brookside, who had died in a fire at the church of her village. All there was the crowd gathering around them and rain falling down from the sky with the clouds blocking the blue sky and sun, she looked at their only son Greg who was looking down at them with tears coming down on his eyelids.
“God? Hear our prayers to the Brookside family. Help their son Greg, grow up and become a strong and healthy man in the future. Help him complete his journey of his life in the future, now you must guide his parents to Heaven as they have passed on to a terrible fire at our church. Look after their son and let them look after their son. Amen.” the village’s pastor prayed to God and the crowd prayed with him as well. Greg only wished they were alive with him and so they could live happily ever after but he never got the chance to, his children won’t meet their grandparents because they are in Heaven. The coffins had l
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Character Bios
Warning this section contains spoilers to the reader about the characters and the plot of the story!
Lysandre: A big brown bat who was raised by fruit bats in the amazon rainforest and serves as the main character of the book. He was born in a container on a ship when they were being delivered by a company, but on a storm he was thrown out of the container and one of the humans thought that he was a big eared bat and put him in the big eared bat container where Jackson and Jamie was. He is the brother of Tabitha and the son of Gillespie and Michael.
Mafalda: A fruit bat who raised Lysandre as her own child. When she was at young age, she took a liking to nature as she loved to stay out in the rain and wanted others to join her, she was friends with Pedro but she never wanted a mate because she refuses. But she later found Lysandre in a tree that she felt bad for him that she decided to raise him. But when she had a fight with Kaxine, she killed Mafalda by choking her with a vine.
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Literature
Nocturnal Rainforest - Epilogue
Lysandre followed Tabitha to the tree as the moon was halfway to the other side of the Earth, they entered a hole in the tree and Lysandre saw many bats that are his species going on their daily schedule. Tabitha showed Lysandre where he sleeps with his mother.
“Is that her? Is that my…” Lysandre looked at his mother as she was roosting thinking about Tabitha.
“Yeah, that’s Gillespie, our mother. She’s thinking about me, let’s go give her a reunion.” he said. Lysandre and Tabitha approached behind Gillespie and poked her, she turns around and covers her mouth in shock.
“Tabitha?!” Gillespie said.
“The one and only!” he said. Gillespie hugged Tabitha tightly with joy.
“Where’s your father?” she questioned.
“He...he died when we were going to where my brother was.” Tabitha answered. Gillespie changed her emotion of happiness to sadness when she had lost her mate.
“But I brought som
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 13
Lysandre had been on top of the tree thinking and remembering Mafalda for hours after last night, he had tears coming from his eyes and couldn’t imagine her death, Lysandre doesn’t want to forget her when he’s all grown up.
“Your thinking about her, I’ve been thinking about her too.” Pedro appeared. Lysandre turned to Pedro.
“I’ve been remembering how she was well, flying in the rain, hanging out with me when we were kids.” he said. Lysandre gave a small smile and turned to the rising moon.
“I know it’s hard to say goodbye but, it’s for the best. I think Tabitha told you that when your father died coming her, he said that he might be looking after you as a spirit right? So Mafalda might be looking after you too.” Pedro said. Lysandre smiled at Pedro and thought about Mafalda next to him, but Lysandre knows that right now he’s going to leave the colony and go to his real mother. Lysandre remembers everyt
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 11
Kaxine stretched her arms and yawned, she hanged upside down after her snack on whatever she ate.
“How do we escape her? She could smell us at any second now!” Tierno whispered to Lysandre. “I’m trying to think about it. Now be quiet.” Lysandre whispered to Tierno. Lysandre crawled out of the hole very slowly to not wake up Kaxine, he crawled as she was dreamed in her sleep like a wolf hybrid. Lysandre quietly crawled onto the hollow of the tree and gave Tierno a hand gesture to come to him but quietly slowly.
“M...momma…..” Kaxine said in her sleep. Tierno stopped at a instant when she talked in her sleep thinking that she noticed her, he continued walking slowly and quiet to Lysandre and he did it.
“That was a close one, let’s go!” he said.
“No, if we flap our wings then she will hear us and she’ll eat us for desert. Let’s just climb down for now.” he said. Tierno approved that he would climb do
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 12
Just 3 years ago before the events that happened in the previous chapters from chapter 1-11, this chapter will show you the childhood of Kaxine when she was younger in Colombia of South America which miles away from the amazon rainforest. Let’s get started on her childhood and why is she like the Kaxine we have know of.
3 years ago at the 4th day of the 5th month in Colombia, Kaxine had migrated with her colony to Colombia. She had felt hungry after the migration and drooled about food.
“I’m so hungry that I would eat my arm.” Kaxine self talked.
“Then try not to, there’s food around here in these woods so we might find some birds or rodents.” her mother said. She wiped of the drool in her mouth.
“How can we find them one of them?” Kaxine said.
“I got 3 things. 1 is sense of smell, 2 is echolocation and 3 is catching the food.” her mother said. Kaxine’s mother went out to get food for Kaxine but was greeted with th
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 10
“Let him go back to his mother, his only mother…” Mafalda made her decision.
“No you can’t! Please daddy let him stay!” Lila whined to Pedro.
“Lila? Do you want him to be happy?” Pedro said and Lila said yes.
“Then let him go see his real mother, and I’m sure that one day you 2 will see each other in the future.” he says. Lila had cried to know that Lysandre will be going back to his mother in the north land.
“I’ll tell him now.” Mafalda said and goes to see Lysandre. She finds Lysandre looking outside the tree to see the rain pouring down from above while he was upside down, she looks around to find Talvin and Tabitha who were with Isaac and Jessy talking to each other of how Jessy was attacked by this carnivore bat named Kaxine. She looks back to Lysandre as he was watching the rain outside and hangs upside down beside him.
“Hi Mafalda.” he said.
“Hello Lysandre.” Mafalda said.
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 9
8 days passed when Lysandre had known about his past in the rainforest, the chicks had been getting bigger that they could now learn how to fly and there are still small animals and birds going missing. The colony still remained in the tree for as long as whoever or whatever is causing these disappearances. Mafalda watched as Lysandre and Talvin with Tabitha talking with each other, she loved how Lysandre is happy with Talvin being back in the colony after his banishment and Tabitha who is Lysandre’s older brother that they haven’t seen each other when they’ve been separated. Mafalda thought about a few things right now, she’s thinking to let Lysandre go back to his real mother or to stay with her. Mafalda flew to talk with Pedro about it, Mafalda greeted Pedro and Pedro greeted her as well.
“What is your question?” he said.
“I’m been thinking…...ever since Lysandre was reunited with his his lost brother Tabitha, he’s been han
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 8
Lysandre looked at the trees while there was rain coming down from the sky, he deeply thought on what his parents really looked like and wanted to visit them. But Pedro won’t let since he made a rule to never go out there because of small animals and birds disappearing. Tabitha came to Lysandre and looked at what he was looking at.
“Your looking at the forest?” Tabitha said. Lysandre turned to Tabitha.
“Yeah, I’m thinking about my parents. Who was our parents?” Lysandre said.
“Well Lysandre. Our dad, Michael is persevere and talented and he wanted to find you when he heard that you were here but..” Tabitha looked down and thought about his father.
“But what?” Lysandre said. Tabitha inhaled to speak something that he will regret saying to his brother.
“He died while we were heading here, falled down to the ocean because of a storm.” he said. Lysandre had felt with grieve that the real father he wanted to meet is now
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 7
Jessy went to grab a mango on a tree to eat, she snapped the branch it was hanging on to then fell on the ground and began eating on the mango.
“Does it taste good?” said a female voice coming from the top. Jessie looked on top to find another bat, but this bat wasn’t a fruit bat nor a big brown bat. It was a bat species she had never seen before.
“Yeah it is! And…. who are you?” Jessie said. The strange bat came down to the ground revealing himself a tall bat but didn’t had the appearance of a fruit bat.
“I am Kaxine! Nice to meet you.” she said. Jessie examined her appearance. She seen that she had marks all over her body as if something was pierced through
“What kind of bat are you?” she questioned Kaxine.
“I belong to the spectrum bat species.” she said. Jessy tilted her head.
“What bat species is that?” Jessy questioned.
“It’s a native species in Mexico.” Kaxine said but had
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 6
“Your..brother?” Lysandre said.
“Yeah. I came here to look for him, I haven’t seen him 3 months ago. And when I met you, I knew you were him!” Tabitha said. Lysandre stunned and shocked from the turn of events as he just met his brother who was from another place. Lysandre shed a tear from his eyes and hugged Tabitha with joy.
“Now this was unexpected, I expected to meet a big brown bat but I didn’t expect him to be my brother!” Lysandre’s voice cracked. Tabitha patted him as he was crying with joy. Pedro approached from above and confronted Tabitha.
“So this is the one they were talking about? Your bat species, from what I just saw you were hugging each other because he must have known you before correct?” he said.
“Yeah, Tabitha’s my brother.” Lysandre told him. Pedro raised his eyebrows about the big brown bat Tabitha being the brother of Lysandre.
“Maybe he should stay with us for a while don&
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 5
“Where are we going?” Tabitha said. Lysandre let Tabitha follow him to his tree.
“To my colony!” Lysandre said.
“What colony?” he said.
“Where I was raised in.” he said. Lysandre found the colony’s tree and looked behind Tabitha as he looked at the tree with awe, Lysandre brought him to the top of the tree to show to the young fruit bats then the colony.
“So this is where you lived through your whole life? It’s pretty cool! I’ve never seen a tree this big before.” Tabitha said.
“You haven’t seen one this big?” Lysandre said.
“Never in my life! I only heard of giant trees but never seen one.”Tabitha said. A growling sound came from the belly of Lysandre which made him embarrassed.
“I have to eat right now, do you want to eat?” Lysandre asked.
“Well I already ate but I have room.” he said. Lysandre went down to the tree to find fruits for him and Tabitha to
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 4
4 weeks passed when Tierno and Marina had encountered a bat similar to Lysandre, they had taken care of him and got food that only his kind would eat and they learned him to speak portuguese instead of the language he spoke which he calls it english. Meanwhile at the colony’s tree, Lysandre had been alone lately but a few fruit bats had felt sorry for him and forgiven for letting that incident with Talvin and Lila to happen. However Pedro is still angry at Lysandre for almost letting the colony to die from a falcon but it didn’t, and his friend that attacked his daughter Lila. Talvin only has 2 weeks to go back to the colony and what they are expecting is that he got a improvement of himself since he’s been out there, Lysandre wanted to apologize to Lila about what happen and forget about it.
Lysandre grabbed a passion fruit from a bush nearby the tree and flown back, he found Lila and gave the fruit to her.
“Why are you giving me that fruit?” she asked. L
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 3
“Hey runt, what are you doing here?” said Lila as she woke up Lysandre. Lysandre woke up to see Lila standing on a branch looking at him with a smirk.
“I was sleeping here so I could show you the feather.” said Lysandre. Lila laughed.
“Do you mean of how you couldn’t get the feather because you were scared? Speaking of feathers what the heck is that smell?” she asked Lysandre about the unknown smell.
“Oh, it’s this!” Lysandre showed Lila the feather of the falcon and she didn’t make a gasp but was shocked and stunned. Talvin flew to Lysandre.
“Did you….just grabbed the feather!?!” said Talvin.
“Yeah I did.” said Lysandre. Lila had been shocked but she tried not to believe that he actually did got the feather.
“NO! I won’t believe you, that feather has to be another bird’s! Is it?!” said Lila.
“Oh yeah it is kid!” said a unfamiliar voice from nowhere. Then
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 2
Mafalda woke up hanging in a branch, looking at the rising moon in front of her eyesight. Mafalda looked under her body to see if Lysandre is alright, she opened her wings and found he wasn’t there.
“Lysandre? Lysandre!” Mafalda tried to find where Lysandre was in in the tree. She looked around only to find most of her colony awake some who already left, something grabbed her behind and her left feet came off except her right feet.
“Got you didn’t I mom?” Said a voice of a young bat who was Lysandre.
“Yes you got me, but don’t scare me because I would fall down.” Mafalda said.
“Sorry mom, I wanted to give you a surprise wake up morning.” Lysandre said.
“Don’t you have to be with Talvin and Isaac?” Mafalda said to Lysandre. Lysandre nodded to his mom.
“Yeah, they are at the top of the tree. I’m pretty sure that’s where the other kids hang out.” Lysandre said. I did say that 2 mont
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Nocturnal Rainforest - Chapter 1
As the side of the Earth was filled with darkness, there was a downpour at the rainforest that made birds and animals flee to shelter for warmth and being dried from the downpour. Above are one of The Animal Kingdom’s Legendary Giants but to the kind are fruit bats, Mafalda one of the colony’s members has been flying on the top of the colony for the good feeling of the dropping of the rain instead of being under the other bats from getting wet, she loved the rain that she might be like the rain. Most of her colony feel unsure about her behavior but most of the children want to try it out. Mafalda was enjoying the rain so far .
“So how is it going up there?” Said a fruit bat.
“It’s pretty well up here!” Mafalda said. Mafalda loved the rain but she couldn’t hear anything, except for a crying from somewhere. She noticed the crying and looked around while she was flying.
“What is it?” Said Talvin, a 1 month old male fruit bat belo
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Prologue

Alyssa looked at the 2 coffins of Fred and Yanny Brookside, who had died in a fire at the church of her village. All there was the crowd gathering around them and rain falling down from the sky with the clouds blocking the blue sky and sun, she looked at their only son Greg who was looking down at them with tears coming down on his eyelids.
“God? Hear our prayers to the Brookside family. Help their son Greg, grow up and become a strong and healthy man in the future. Help him complete his journey of his life in the future, now you must guide his parents to Heaven as they have passed on to a terrible fire at our church. Look after their son and let them look after their son. Amen.” the village’s pastor prayed to God and the crowd prayed with him as well. Greg only wished they were alive with him and so they could live happily ever after but he never got the chance to, his children won’t meet their grandparents because they are in Heaven. The coffins had lowered down to the ground of the Earth just like the people that were inside the coffins around them, now they were buried by dirt and now the coffins couldn’t been seen from above the ground. The crowd had left but Greg didn’t, Alyssa looked back at Greg as he was looking at his parents grave and Alyssa continued with the crowd back to the village.

Greg crouched down to see the grave stones better and stared at them for a while.
“Wish you guys would be lucky to survive.” Greg said. Greg looked atop of the gravestones to see the Cavanal Hill far away from his village and saw the hill as it was something he had discovered a new hill.
“I’ll make your wish come true Mom...Dad.” Greg said and walked away. Greg walked back to his home and there was his friend Eric sitting down on his bed, Eric raised his head and looked towards Greg.
“It’s been a rough day yesterday was it?” he said. Greg starts to flashback on the fire at the church.
“Yeah, it has…but you need to leave my home, I need some time alone.” he said. Eric understood and left Greg’s house to give him some time alone, Greg entered his parents room and had grabbed his father’s notebook. Greg went to his bedroom and grabbed a leather satchel to bring some stuff with him, he grabbed his leather water bottle and went to fill it up at the fountain. He proceeded to where Cavanal Hill was behind his parents grave, he expected to a long walk there and once he gets there he would build a house that his parents had wished to live in on Cavanal Hill.
“ Greg where are you going?” Greg looked behind to see Alyssa walking to him.
“I’m going to Cavanal Hill, I’ll be back here in a few days.” Greg said. Alyssa grabbed his arm before he would proceed to the hill.
“Greg, don’t leave the village. What if you were attacked by bandits or wild animals? What if that hill is dangerous?” Alyssa said.
“I have to go, My parents dreamed of living at the hill.” Greg said and walked away. Alyssa stayed and saw him leave.
Secrets of Cavanal Hill
This is the prologue of a new story I have written which is based on fantasy, enjoy it until the end.

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Secrets of Cavanal Hill

Written by João Lucas Rocha Alexandre

Inspired by Bridge to Terabithia


Set in Oklahoma 1786, Greg Brookside a 17 year old boy travels to Cavanal Hill which is the world’s most highest hill ever to exist so he could build a house to grant his parent’s wish to live there. But when he ventures to reach the hill, he encounter fantasy beings and creatures that were thought to be just stories and legends. Greg soon learns that the land he is in belonged to a kingdom that perished many years ago but it’s remains were still there and also learns that his parents had been in the place when they were young. Greg has to journey through the fallen kingdom to build the dream house that his parents wished to live in at Cavanal Hill but soon learns what happened to the kingdom.


Most of you known me as the Deviant who would send requests of inviting you to my group called TeamRR which is a group based on Team Rainbow Rocket and as you go into that group or search it, you won't find it because it was closed down. The reason is because not many people liked Team Rainbow Rocket because of it's name and the villains. And also because not many people joined my group, I wanted to have fun for once so I could be a villain in DeviantArt but it didn't happened. So now I go back being a Deviant and I would just watch other groups being successful in their work and dreams. I hope you guys may understand the reason for this.
This artwork of Sylveon makes me feel like it's my Slyveon from Ultra Moon, she also has a characteristic of loving to run so this Sylveon is just like my Sylveon. And those lights around her looks like small glowing Pokemon that are flying around her. I hope that you would make more pictures of Pokemon in their natural habitats and doing their daily business, Sylveon is one of my favorite Pokemon in gen 6. I would be much happier if you had a Sylveon with you in the gen 6 and gen 7 Pokemon games just like I have.
So most Pokemon fans heard about the new criminal team in Pokemon Ultra Sun and Ultra Moon that appears in the post games who call themselves Team Rainbow Rocket which is a group of people that are the new and improved Team Rocket with new members who are the leaders of criminal teams from previous Pokemon games. So I searched up if they had any Team Rainbow Rocket groups in DeviantArt and I found none, guess not many people must like Team Rainbow Rocket because of it's name.

Secrets of Cavanal Hill

Written by João Lucas Rocha Alexandre

Inspired by Bridge to Terabithia


Set in Oklahoma 1786, Greg Brookside a 17 year old boy travels to Cavanal Hill which is the world’s most highest hill ever to exist so he could build a house to grant his parent’s wish to live there. But when he ventures to reach the hill, he encounter fantasy beings and creatures that were thought to be just stories and legends. Greg soon learns that the land he is in belonged to a kingdom that perished many years ago but it’s remains were still there and also learns that his parents had been in the place when they were young. Greg has to journey through the fallen kingdom to build the dream house that his parents wished to live in at Cavanal Hill but soon learns what happened to the kingdom.


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I haven't been posting stuff lately due to that I'm working on my stories in Google Docs which is easier for me to upload them to DeviantArt. So it may take a while for them but I'll post the stories soon. So stay tuned.
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