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ProtC Prologue: Page Three



Prophecy of the Circle: Tangent, page three. For more info see the official site at

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I like the earthy palette and the textures here. You're good at defining form, but consider studying lines of action to improve the clarity of each pose. Panel composition is really nice, nothing reads as flat to me.

I think one thing I'd like to see in the presentation on Deviantart are links to previous, next, and first pages. Even though you want people to go to the website instead, some of your readers may prefer Deviantart since it delivers each page to their inboxes. :)