8 Tips for Writing Dialogue for your Characters by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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8 Tips for Writing Dialogue for your Characters
8 Tips for Writing Dialogue for your Characters Anybody Can Write a Novel Chapter 5 “Choosing and Designing Characters” – Section 4 “Dialogue” With Links to Supplementary Material Dialogue is a tricky topic, and for two key reasons. The first is that creating realistic dialogue is a difficult skill to master—even in day-to-day life—without speech coming out plastic, pointless, or otherwise unconvincing. The second problem is that the proper dialogue for your story is deeply rooted within the other elements—the characters, the setting, the genre, etc... Because of this, writing dialogue that is custom fitted to your story, requires adjus...
11 Tips for Romance in Your Novel by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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11 Tips for Romance in Your Novel
11 Tips for Romance in Your Novel Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 2 “Genres” – Section 2 “Romance” ( Previous Tutorial ) ( Next Tutorial ) “I always think the most romantic books or films are the ones where the romance doesn't happen, because it makes your heart ache so much watching it.”-Natalie Portman Within the genre of romance, as well as every other genre of fiction, one finds love stories. Love is enough of a universal human experience, that it can happen within the context of any type of story. It draws reader attention, unlike any other topic. However, the world of literature has been flooded with cliched, ...
7 Tips for Writing Fantasy by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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7 Tips for Writing Fantasy
7 Tips for Writing Fantasy Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 2 “Genres” – Section 3 “Fantasy” ( Previous Tutorial ) ( Next Tutorial ) “Fantasy is hardly an escape from reality. It's a way of understanding it.”-Lloyd Alexander My editor tells me that I have a magical super-power, one that I feel I must now share with you. I have the magical ability to look at a shelf of books and pick out the absolute worst fantasy novel there. As a result of my super-power, I used to think I hated fantasy because it was filled with so many of the most tired and overused tropes in existence that I was bored out of my skull. Having be...
5 Tips for Word Use in Your Novel by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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5 Tips for Word Use in Your Novel
5 Tips for Word Use in Your Novel Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 7 “Editing” – Section 4 “Words” “Words are but symbols for the relations of things to one another and to us; nowhere do they touch upon absolute truth.” -Friedrich Nietzsche Now that we've talked about how words function as part of a sentence, we're going to look at them as methods of communication, in terms of what they mean and how they function. This means that we're going to be taking a short break from all the technical grammar until next article [pauses for cheers and applause and perhaps booing from the Grammar Nazis (you know who you are, and that I love e...
Thoughts: Fiction Writers by DerangedDiligence, literature
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Thoughts: Fiction Writers
Fiction writers, I think, like scientists, simply want to learn.
We want to know and see and understand - all things - not just because we want to constantly grow but rather because at any point in time we can have a character take us down a very unexpected path.
I never know what I might be writing for, that day. A doctor? A physicist? A priest? A bull breeder? An entomologist? A homeless, ex-veteran? I never know and because I can never know, I can never stop learning because unlike the doctor and the physicist and the priest and the bull breeder and the entomologist and the homeless, ex-veteran...I'm a fiction writer and I need to be able to convince a WIDE audience of people I'm ALL of those things.
Never forget how much work is put into creating believable fiction. Our hearts and souls dwell here.
9 Tips for Understanding Originality in Stories by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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9 Tips for Understanding Originality in Stories
9 Tips for Understanding Originality in Stories Chapter 8 “From Story to Art” – Section 7 “Originality" Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 ( Previous Tutorial ) ( Next Tutorial ) “Originality is nothing but judicious imitation. The most original writers borrowed one from another.”-Voltaire One topic that I’ve wanted to discuss for a while now is on originality. The difficulty, I’ve found, is that the subject is rather nebulous and deeply personal to artists. Everyone has a slightly different definition in mind when they talk about originality...
6 Tips for Writing Erotica by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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6 Tips for Writing Erotica
6 Tips for Writing Erotica Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 2 “Genres” – Section 14 “Erotica” ( Previous Tutorial ) ( Next Tutorial ) "There is more to sex appeal than just measurements. I don't need a bedroom to prove my womanliness. I can convey just as much sex appeal, picking apples off a tree or standing in the rain." -Audrey Hepburn With the mainstream publication of “50 Shades of Gray” and its many rip-offs, erotica has become a popularized genre with stories, plots, character development, and the same sort of expectations as any other genre. That being said, I've never read any erotica that met those standards ...
7 Tips for Adjusting Your Story's Pace by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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7 Tips for Adjusting Your Story's Pace
7 Tips for Adjusting Your Story's Pace Anybody Can Write a Novel Chapter 7 “From Story to Art” – Section 11 “Pacing” With Links to Supplementary Material Have you ever received or given criticism for a story being too rapid and confusing or too slow and boring? Perhaps you had a specific scene that you just couldn't get to fit right with the epic scene that followed. When writers find these issues, it is very often a problem of incorrect pacing in the text. The speed at which the reader perceived the story was simply not working to make the timing work to create a dynamic experience. Today, I'm going to talk about the fine-tuning proces...
7 Tips For Writing Action Scenes by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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7 Tips For Writing Action Scenes
7 Tips For Writing Action Scenes Anybody Can Write a Novel Chapter 7 “From Story to Art” – Section 7 “Action Scenes” With Links to Supplementary Material Action scenes in a novel are a difficult tool to master, but well worth the time and effort to create dramatic an memorable scenes that will engage and entertain your readers. To pull them off effectively, you must be able to keep a quick yet varied pace, keep a tight focus, reflect your story, and make it all quick and crisp. Today, I'm going to give you a starting-point for honing your skills in this method of storytelling. Tip 1: Create a visible plane of space to work within. Blak...
8 Tips for Becoming Self-motivated to Write by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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8 Tips for Becoming Self-motivated to Write
8 Tips for Becoming Self-motivated to Write Anybody Can Write a Novel Chapter 1 “Beginning to Write” – Section 4 “Self-Discipline” With Links to Supplementary Material I've talked before about dealing with writer's block, and different techniques for conquering it. But how do we write diligently and with self-motivation, given the overwhelming amount of distraction around us and the difficulty in becoming self-motivated? Today, I'm going to give some of the strategies that I have found to help me the most, so that you can try them or even modify them to fit your own personal strengths and vulnerabilities. Tip 1: Identify the problem. T...
12 Tips for Writing Historical Fiction by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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12 Tips for Writing Historical Fiction
12 Tips for Writing Historical Fiction Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 2 “Genres” – Section 6 “Historical Fiction” ( Previous Tutorial ) ( Next Tutorial ) "History is the version of past events that people have decided to agree upon."-Napoleon Bonaparte I do not believe in much of a hard line between history and historical fiction. The reason for my belief is that as soon as you begin to fill in the blanks for events and motivations outside of the historical record, you have already altered the history. Blurring the line ev...
10 Tips for Description in Your Novel by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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10 Tips for Description in Your Novel
10 Tips for Description in Your Novel Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 7 “Editing” – Section 8 “Descriptions” "Setting shouldn't just consist of describing nature or a landscape, or of saying where something takes place. It is the world of specific people. It's not enough for it to feel vivid or credible; it should feel necessary." -Kaui Hart Hemmings Last time, I said that the next tutorial I worked on would be on the topic of editing, and I had every intention of doing that. So I worked this entire time on that tutorial (minus time spent writing and traveling, of course) and made a slightly disheartening discovery the day bef...
9 Tips for Overcoming Writer's Block by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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9 Tips for Overcoming Writer's Block
9 Tips for Overcoming Writer's Block Anybody Can Write a Novel Version 2.0 Chapter 1 “Beginning to Write” – Section 3 “Writer's Block” ( Previous Tutorial ) ( Next Tutorial ) “The secret of getting ahead is getting started. The secret of getting started is breaking your complex overwhelming tasks into small manageable tasks, and then starting on the first one.” —Mark Twain Sometimes we find ourselves at a point in writing where there is simply no motivation. Our muse or creative spirit simply does not motivate us like it normally does. And the trouble is that these moments can last a long time. A day without writing can bec...
Jane's eyes widened in horror.
Her fingernails … were they a bit ... longer? Darker?
Why here? Why now?
A sharp, sudden pressure jabbed at her tongue and cheek. Instinctively she concealed her
mouth with both ash-covered hands. She did not need a mirror to know exactly what was
happening to her body. But why? She had absolutely no clue what she did to cause it to react
this way ...
Jane's breath grew rapid and hot. No time.
She knew she had to force herself out of it. If she let herself panic, all hope would be lost.
Jane squeezed her eyes shut. It was dark; she tried to concentrate. The young woman
reached out in her mind, trying over and over again to grasp onto something, anything she
could focus on, but the memories continued to slip away …The darkness was not calming, it
was blinding! She couldn't see!
The pulsating of her chest tore into her concentration.
No …
Jane would not let this happen. She could not let this happen. She drew a long, deep
8 Tips for Writing Your Story's Epilogue by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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8 Tips for Writing Your Story's Epilogue
8 Tips for Writing Your Story's Epilogue Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 6 “Plot Points” – Section 12 “Epilogue” “A true epilogue is removed from the story in time or space. That's the reason it is called an 'Epilogue'; the label serves to alert the reader that the story itself is over, but we are going to now see a distant result or consequence of that story.”
-Nancy Kress The most basic element of a story are the efforts of a protagonist to reach a goal, to fight the antagonistic forces that prevents him/her from reaching that goal, and to either achieve it or fail. By the end of the Climax, it should be clear whether your...
things I never told you. by littleblueraccoon, literature
Literature
things I never told you.
some poems feel like water.
this one is more like sand,
and I'm suffocating in the maw
of a desert that was better left
rusting its clairvoyance.it started one night when I remembered
that I've kept everything you've ever given me:
roses, faces, promises.
I never really understood
how to let things go,
and when the thought of
turning the things you'd touched
away from my doorstep
choked the poetry from my throat,
I realized why.I keep reminding myself that
I should probably be nicer to you,
but I think you already know
that I'm only capable of being nice
when I'm cornered and out of ideas.and despite what you claim,
you've never been lik...
6 Tips for Creating Character Motivation by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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6 Tips for Creating Character Motivation
6 Tips for Creating Character Motivation Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 5 “Characters” – Section 12 “Motivation” ( Previous Tutorial ) ( Next Tutorial ) “Human behavior flows from three main sources: desire, emotion, and knowledge.” -Plato I've found that character motivation seems to categorize people into two groups—those for who it comes naturally and those who need to put conscious effort into it. Some people get it without even thinking about what they're doing, while others need to make a plan. Neither group is necessarily better at writing than the other, it's just an interesting dividing point among us that allo...
11 Tips for Editing Your Novel by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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11 Tips for Editing Your Novel
11 Tips for Editing Your Novel Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 7 “Revision” – Section 7 “Editing” “Words are the coins making up the currency of sentences, and there are always too many small coins.” -Jules Renard Once you finish with the drafting phase of writing your novel (the process of perfecting the plot elements and making the text mostly perfect through the process of many rewrites), you will reach the editing stage. Editing is the point in the novel-writing process where we begin to fix all of the technical errors and try to make each word, sentence, and paragraph perfect for publication. Ideally, all of the devices in t...
7 Tips for Collaborative Writing by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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7 Tips for Collaborative Writing
7 Tips for Collaborative Writing Anybody Can Write a Novel Chapter 7 “From Story to Art” – Section 10 “Co-Writing” With Links to Supplementary Material It has become increasingly popular for writers to want to collaborate with another person in order to create a story, and with good reason. Having another person cuts down the amount of work each of you has to do, gives you new perspective, challenges your style, and can help you improve tremendously. That being said, it is also has about the same likelihood of succeeding as a business venture of selling Popsicles in Antarctica. Today, I'm going to explain the flaws in writing collaborat...
15 Tips for Writing Horror by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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15 Tips for Writing Horror
15 Tips for Writing Horror Chapter 2 “Genres” – Section 6 “Horror"
Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 ( Previous Tutorial ) ( Next Tutorial ) “[Horror fiction] shows us that the control we believe we have is purely illusory, and that every moment we teeter on chaos and oblivion.” ― Clive Barker Horror is a genre which plays upon the emotions of the audience, but it does so for very specific reasons. We may not always analyze why we are made afraid by a sotry, but there are usually specific reason for our fears, a specific nature to them, and a specific way in which we can make fear more effective. So today, we are going to ta...
11 Tips for Writing an Autobiographical Story by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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11 Tips for Writing an Autobiographical Story
11 Tips for Writing an Autobiographical Story Chapter 2 “Genres” – Section 7 “Autobiographical"
Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 ( Previous Tutorial ) ( Next Tutorial ) "It is long ere we discover how rich we are. Our history, we are sure, is quite tame: we have nothing to write, nothing to infer. But our wiser years still run back to the despised recollections of childhood, and always we are fishing up some wonderful article out of that pond; until, by and by, we begin to suspect that the biography of the one foolish person we know is, in reality, nothing less than the miniature paraphrase of the hundred volumes of the Univers...
6 Tips for Writing Your Story's Disaster by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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6 Tips for Writing Your Story's Disaster
6 Tips for Writing Your Story's Disaster Anybody Can Write a Novel 2.0 Chapter 6 “Plot Points” – Section 7 “Disaster” “There's a victory, and defeat; the first and best of victories, the lowest and worst of defeats which each man gains or sustains at the hands not of another, but of himself.”
-Plato After your protagonist is defeated in the Midpoint, comes the point at which they will have an emotional spiral into turmoil and dire consequences for everyone who had stakes in your protagonist's victory. Your protagonist will be impacted by this failure more here than anywhere else in the story—feeling like they have just been thrown to...
6 Steps to Writing Your Story's Inciting Incident by DesdemonaDeBlake, literature
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6 Steps to Writing Your Story's Inciting Incident
PLEASE NOTE THAT WHILE THIS PAGE WILL REMAIN ACTIVE FOR PURPOSES OF EDUCATION AND RECORDS, IT IS OUTDATED. CLICK HERE TO ACCESS THE NEWEST VERSION. 6 Steps to Writing Your Story's Inciting Incident Anybody Can Write a Novel Chapter 4 “Plot Points” – Section 2 “The Inciting Incident” With Links to Supplementary Material Once you have completed your Prologue/Beginning , your next plot-point will be the Inciting Incident. This is the point at which your protagonist's life or world are forever changed—pushing them to some sort of reaction. This will be Chapter 1 of your novel (unless you prefer to use your prologue as your first chap...