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Lil Waitress Kitty

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Now ready to bring you to your tables and take yer orders. XD

Suggestions and feedback would be really helpful so I can improve. =w=b

Used this figure as a base and reference
blog.fromjapan.co.jp/en/wp-con…
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This is such a fun picture, and she looks adorable in that outfit!! The pose is great and I love the movement of the dress and tail. You really are talented and have a super cute style!!

There isn't anything that stands out as being wrong, but there are a few things that you can work on to make your next piece even better. Anatomy of the face, your eyes look great they line up but they are a bit simple for the focal point of your picture perhaps try adding more than just one color to the black and white. The eyes of pictures like this are one of the most important things to make look amazing because then your overall picture will look amazing. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> The mouth is slightly off, the tongue doesn't look quite right. Also, the face shape is looking slightly like a sideways oval. The best way to practice this is to look at artist you admires work and see how they do it and to sketch their drawings and real life drawings to figure out who everything works together.

The colors you chose are beautiful and I like your simple shading style, perhaps try repeating your colors more thorough your picture, it will tie your colors together better and bring unity to your picture.

your art is fantastic, keep practicing and your next artworks will only get better and better!