AatR Round 4 Page 14

AND SCENE. FIN. END OF ROUND.

Like I said two pages ago, I am soooo way late on this it is not even funny. Well, considering when I submitted the last pages of my last two rounds (I'm including the epilogue of Round 2 in this count, because there was very little closure or clarity otherwise), this is as on time as I've been since Round 1. I have an array of excuses that I will disclose, but only upon request.

I wish I could have made the round longer, but obviously I struggled with the current length. As always, I don't feel like I've quite done justice with my opponent's characters- but I tried to use them as best I could within the confines of time and plot. Also, sorry Gwen for making you even more of a damsel in distress than you make yourself!

This isn't the ending I originally had planned for this round- it actually takes a step in a much different direction than what I had planned for Round 5, if I get there. So NOW if I go on, I'm going to have to regroup a bit. But in a good way, I think.

I always wait to say things until the end, and then I don't remember what I was going to say! But this is enough rambling, I think. I'll try to clean these up soon, but first- rest.

Iris, Obsidian, Erroneous, and Gwenevere are property of

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