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I have "disowned" this story arch. You will not be able to find any of the chapters on my page. However, I will not remove them since a few people really like it. Please enjoy my very first completed fan fiction!

'What is this white stuff?'

'Why is it so cold?'

'Why am I so cold?'

Snow gently falls. A girl, appearing to be 18, lies in the soft snow. Her brown hair shivers in the chilling wind.

'Where am I?'

'Why can’t I move?'

She then hears soft footsteps. She opens her pink eyes as wide as she can, though she is very weak. A tall figure towers over her.

“Are you ok?” it asks.

Then everything went black.

'It’s now… warm.'

She opens her eyes to find herself in a bed room. She rises from under the covers and gazes around. The walls are a dark red with white bordering. The door and curtains are white too. The bed she is laying in is very big. It has a veil towering over. The blankets are red with a gold bordering and the sheets are white. The pillows match the blankets. The room is dim since there are only a few candles lit and little light shines through the window. She climbs out of the bed and walks to the door. She became cold again.

“Burr! I’m cold again. I should take a blanket with me.”

She goes back to the bed and pulls off a quilt. She wraps it around herself and walks back to the door. She opens the door and peers through. No one is there. She opens the door even more and steps out. She walks down the hallway. She realizes that this house is very big after she walks pass the lobby area. She pauses to stare. Up high in the main lobby, hanging from the ceiling, is a very beautiful chandelier. It sparkles like diamonds. Then she smells something.

“What is that? It smells like…food.”

She follows the smell to a partially closed door. She peers through to see three figures. She assumed they were men since she can only see their backs.

“Let’s all try my country’s special dish!”

“Um… no, thank you! I rather have my favorite dish.”

“But the both of us won’t eat yours!”

*Sigh* “Why us? We have completely different cultures.”

All three of them nod. She leans on the door to hear better but the door made a creaking sound. The three turn around and see her. She blushes in embarrassment and tries to hide her face. She did look at them though: One has bright short blond hair, a pair of glasses and wears a grey uniform; the other one has darker blond hair and wears a green uniform; and lastly, the shortest one, has bright blond hair and wears a red uniform. The three are surprised to see her.

The awkward silence ends when the smallest one spoke, “So, you are awake, huh?”

“I guess you smelled the food, right?” the darker blond said.

She nods.

“Well, how about I get you something to eat,” says the one with the glasses.

“No I will! Since I’m cooking right now!” says the darker blond.

As the two argue, the short one offers her a seat at the table. She walks over and sits down.

“Th-thank you,” she says meekly.

“Anything for the guest.”

The trio decided to cook the darker blonde’s dinner since his has already started. It was not long till it was done. She takes a bite of it and smiles.

“It’s good!” she says. Then she takes another bite.

“Thank you!” they said all at once.

“It was one of my favorite soups: Sauerkraut soup*,” the darker blonde replies.

The others got their dinners ready and joined her at the table.

“I must know, where am I?” she asks after finishing her meal.

“Oh! You don’t know?” the short one asks.

She only shakes her head.

“Well, you are in the house of Mr. Russia.”

“Mr. Russia?”

“Yes ma’am. ”

She becomes quiet. Mr. Russia? Who is that?

“Oh how rude of us! We haven’t introduced ourselves!” says the one with the glasses.

“Quite right!” replies the dark blonde.

“Oh yes!” the small one says excitedly.

The three got up from their seats and stand in a line.

“I’m Estonia.”

“I’m Lithuania.”

“And I’m Latvia.”

“We are known as the Baltic Trio,” they said all at once.

“It is nice to meet you. I’m…I’m…um…”

“Is something wrong?” asks Latvia.

“Yes. I don’t know my name.”

“WHAT!?” the three shout all at once.

“How can you forget your name?” Latvia asks.

“Can you remember anything else?” Estonia asks, quickly changing the subject.

“Well, no. All I can remember is seeing this really tall dark figure. That’s all.”

“Really? That’s all?” Lithuania asks.

Just then, a door opens and closes with a heavy thud.


The three grow nervous.

“What’s wrong?” she asks curiously.

“He’s a little early!” Latvia says nervously.

“Latvia? Estonia? Lithuania?  Are you here?”

“That voice…it sounds like…” she mumbles to herself.

“Ack! Um…I think it would be best if we get moving!” Estonia announces nervously.

“And you need some proper wear!” Latvia says as he looks at her. She is still wrapped in the quilt.

“Ok! Latvia, you take her back to the guest room while Estonia and I occupy Mr. Russia!” orders Lithuania.

“What?! How come you get to give orders!?”

“Not time for arguments, Estonia!”

Latvia motions her to the door as they follow her. Just when she opens it, she bumps into someone. She looks up. He is very tall. His hair is a pale white and his eyes are violet. He wears a tan trench coat with a star metal and a long white scarf wrapped around his neck. He is surprised. His and her eyes met, either of them dared to move, and they even blush a little. And for the Baltics, they are just as surprised.

* Sauerkraut soup - often seasoned with pork, carrots, onions, and bay leaves.
Well, I think it is ready. 'this means it is inside your head!' I have no idea how to italic words in this. This is a story about a girl who has no memory. If you read my Hetalia legend, I more like to go off that! kolkolkol! I am just in love with Russia! I just have a thing for mysterious characters! So yes, Russia is going to be the main Hetalia character. No worries! the others will be there too!

Let me know if there is any confusion or grammar issues! more eyes are better! Also, tell me how to use italics in this! I don't know computer codes really well (or say, not at all!). :3

MAJOR EDIT: This story has been disowned my me so you will not find this on my profile any more. But, this will not be "deleted" since quite a lot of people like it.…
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leafstep Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love it!!!
and for italics, you put < i > no spaces, but i don't know how to only have one sentence like that. maybe try using a word document?
Swiftstar01 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I typed this in word. I'll give it a try later! Thanks! :)
leafstep Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Swiftstar01 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks to my awesome step-mom, I figured it out! it is:
start with < i >
Then end the sentence with < / i >
no spaces by the way.
leafstep Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah! thanks!
you inspired me to write a Hetalia story
Swiftstar01 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I saw that. I plan to read it in a bit1 :)
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