Thank you so very much for this wonderfull critique! The color version is not so colorfull so this is the right choice. I had never heard of Bresson before but I read a little about him and.. I guess I should be honored of the comparison, thank you once again! You know, I haven't read 2 lines about photography in my life so this is kinda strange.. the dd.. anyway, thanks
1st of all, thank you very much for your time to write this critique!
You are right about the frame I think, it's a bit distracting I admit.(this rhymes ) I consider changing it. As you can see, I haven't submit a print to this deviation.. if I do so, it will be frameless.
I too have a perfectly good monitor. I have seen this work on a professional monitor and it looks quite alright. The water is very dark green indeed, but that is because of the mood you are reffering to. This is in my opinion what makes this picture good - the contrast. I don't know about how it will look on prints, you are probably right about that. Thank you.