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Alone

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By sweetprey   |   Watch
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Published: September 5, 2003
I feel alone.
Seperate from others.
Suffering from a broken heart.
I cry.

I have friends.
They care for me.
But their too busy with their lives.
Am I selfish?

I stand in the highwall not caring.
I watch my life pass by in blurrs.
Turning my head just looking around.
I bleed.

My heart bleeds.
I feel so alone.
I watch people hug and kiss.
I want.

I try to get noticed.
I scream at the top of my lungs.
No one notices.
I fall.

I curl up in fetal position in the middle of the floor.
I tug my hair gently to see if I'm still alive.
I claw at my skin to bleed more.
I disappear.

My life keeps on going.
But I dont.
I walk like on autopilot.
I'm non-existent.
© 2003 - 2019 sweetprey
I feel alone.
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genuina's avatar
genuinaNew Deviant

beautiful! can relate!

Sylveonfox's avatar
I hope you feel better
TsukariKaoru's avatar
TsukariKaoruHobbyist Traditional Artist
I miss my dad
Sylveonfox's avatar
I’m sorry *hugs*

I’m sure he was awesome.
hulobo's avatar
I feel exactly the same. Loved it!
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artist-alwaysStudent Traditional Artist
Beautiful~ :heart:
MDesignInc's avatar
MDesignIncHobbyist General Artist
Right in the heart~ . 
Good job.
RedHeartBlackHeart's avatar
RedHeartBlackHeartStudent General Artist
Do you still feel that way?
ThatRoamingAngel's avatar
ThatRoamingAngelStudent Artist
moi aussi
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cheshire987357Student Digital Artist
I love your poem, im going through this right now, my friends are always there but always seem to shut me out of their conversations and I just tell myself im being a stupid needy freak
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TheCavesInObllivionStudent General Artist
it's funny how poetry and writings like this can make me feel a little better...
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Diamond5OOOStudent Artist
agreed.
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ElwinRansomHobbyist Writer
same
your-personal-demon's avatar
same here 
kinda reminds me of who I am 
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gorillazplanetStudent General Artist
i feel this way every day but i dont understand why im so loved by so many people yet i feel so sad Really Sad 
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SaiyukiLover666Hobbyist Artist
that's my life too 
gaby-neko's avatar
gaby-nekoStudent
So me right now....
Starice1's avatar
Starice1Student Traditional Artist
me......
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SpitestarHobbyist Digital Artist
Wow sad story.
beituna's avatar
my life keeps on going but i dnt....exactly mate
JennyJinx's avatar
i loved that manga where you got the pic from!! clover, right? :3
oh, and on the other note, there will always be somebody there. :] :tighthug:
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