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just a girl.

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suzi9mm commented on 134 by ghostwheel
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

this caught my eye with the interesting positioning and color. i think the models and how they are posed makes it interesting and i am curious as the viewer. however i am left uncertain what emotions or feelings this could or should evoke. i am not sure what the image suggests, if anything?

technically, i thin he is perhaps overtly blurry, just a tiny bit more detail to show his expression would be interesting for me. and her expression im not sure of, is it satisfaction?

her face is "photoshopped to hell" if you pardon my language. smoothing and softening are needed of course for a flawless mag cover type of finsh but i think this may have gone just a bit too far, there is nothing real left on the skin. it looks fake compared to the rest of the photo. make up is gorgeous though, of course, my greetings to the artist <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

so while really original and a great attempt, i think this leaves me a bit cold, id like to see more emotion that could be brought in by showing more of their pose or something on their faces. and id go easier with photoshop, this looks like they might be 2 diff photos, i.e. photomanip.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

i appreciate the gothic portrait direction that i think you're going to. the model has potential too, i think you caught an interesting look on her.

in the description, you mention where this was shot (cemetery), however it is not shown in the photo in any way. perhaps you would like to include something 'cemeterish' in the bg...?

the umbrella is a nice touch, u could try play with it, give it more attention in some way.

the model is positioned top center, not very interestingly in other words. i think you could get much more out of this if you have her more to the left or right, then include some background, or umbrella/hair/dress. the dress is probably nicely gothic, but we cannot see much of it now!
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suzi9mm commented on London by suzi9mm
thanks, well just wanted to say hi, ive been away too, and still am :D take care!
suzi9mm commented on London by suzi9mm
thanks so much. i hope you are well too :)