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A scene from my OCT-story at 
Download it to see the full-view, it looks best in that
I admit, I am really proud how this one turned out. Maybe because I haven't drawn anything proper for quite a while
. I meant to make it a full-production with color and all, but sadly my hands aren't feeling up to it AT ALL (stupid carpal-tunnel), so a greyshading was the best I could do... for now at least 
AND LOOK! Her boobs are normal sized! I'm so proud of myself~ XD
This is from one of the final scenes in my "OCT Finale Part 3" with my character Wren standing over KC. The title itself is ironic, though I think it'd make more sense if one has read my entry.
Also, yes. I know KC is supposed to have a tail, but it just looked stupid to have it come out on the side, so I figure she keeps it tucked under her so it's not visible~
KC is owned by
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OCT Finale Epilogue: [link]
OCT Finale Part 3: [link]
OCT Finale Part 2: [link]
OCT Finale Part 1: [link]
OCT Round 3: [link]
OCT Round 2: [link]
OCT Round 1: [link]
Audition story: [link]
Character sheet: [link]
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: I'd like pointers on the overall composition and posing of the picture please =3
Download it to see the full-view, it looks best in that
I admit, I am really proud how this one turned out. Maybe because I haven't drawn anything proper for quite a while
AND LOOK! Her boobs are normal sized! I'm so proud of myself~ XD
This is from one of the final scenes in my "OCT Finale Part 3" with my character Wren standing over KC. The title itself is ironic, though I think it'd make more sense if one has read my entry.
Also, yes. I know KC is supposed to have a tail, but it just looked stupid to have it come out on the side, so I figure she keeps it tucked under her so it's not visible~
KC is owned by
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OCT Finale Epilogue: [link]
OCT Finale Part 3: [link]
OCT Finale Part 2: [link]
OCT Finale Part 1: [link]
OCT Round 3: [link]
OCT Round 2: [link]
OCT Round 1: [link]
Audition story: [link]
Character sheet: [link]
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I love comic book like sketches, especially when they are as well done as this piece. Comic book sketches are slightly simplified compared to some other forms of illustration, but also have to be able to tell a story. I feel like you represent this perfectly.
I see a girl who has has feelings for this man for a while, but he ignores her - though his feeling are returned. As a result, whatever danger has attacked her - he was the first to be there to save her. The Hero.
This may not be the story you were attempting to portray, but it is what I saw.
I apologized it has taken us so long to give you your critique, we have been slightly backed up in our art critiques, but we are slowly getting back on track.
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