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It Began Here

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It was only half past ten when she took her last breath. The doctor looked at me with fear in his eyes and said, "It won't be long now."
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A little something for #WriterArt's two-sentence short story contest, that I only discovered because of *iceofwolf.
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iceofwolfHobbyist Writer
I've had zombies on my mind, so I'm guessing zombies. :aww:
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SunGryphonHobbyist General Artist
Could be!
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MamaLuciaHobbyist Artisan Crafter
Vampire problems? :?
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SunGryphonHobbyist General Artist
Could be...
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ZOMBIES! :dance:

Alternatively: VAMPIRES! :happybounce:

Love it! :D
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Hehe thank you :D
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Very cool! There are so many implications. And in two sentences you managed to convey a sense of horror. Nicely done.
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SunGryphonHobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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LegionaireBHobbyist Writer
So many possibilities... I'd love to see this expanded after the contest.
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SunGryphonHobbyist General Artist
I've been thinking about possibly doing just that :D Thanks!
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