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Derpy delivers some love

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Derpy delivers love to you!

I finally buckles down and tried to mimic the line art and colouring of the show. Did I do alright? Please feel free to offer suggestions :3
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Missysartbook's avatar
Too cute & I love that bag. :love:
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GanondoxHobbyist General Artist
She's so cute.
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Sunfur Artist
Thank you!
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Eagle1DivisionHobbyist General Artist
You should do more of these :P
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Eagle1DivisionHobbyist General Artist
Wow! It really looks like the show! You really did an amazing job.

Thing, though - first let me say this disclaimer; I'm great at spotting details; I'm an eagleye at details, if it wasn't for that, I wouldn't have noticed, so I think most people wouldn't be able to even tell the difference, but I've done some careful study to try to improve my own drawings (which, Ironically, are much worse than this :P ), so there's two things I notice to improve:

The wings:
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They're a lot like a hand. The innermost feather is a bit shorter than feather 2, which is the longest. Feather 3, the third one outwards, is shorter than the innermost. And the final feather, the bottom/outmost (It's on the bottom when the wing is folded), is really tiny.
The second layer of shorter feathers is a bit different: The top is the longest, the middle is just a bit shorter, and the bottom is tiny.
Also note, the second layer disapears sometimes: [link]

And, Derpy had kinda pointed eyelashes that are a bit longer: [link]

Lol, like I said, don't take it as criticism, you're doing an amazing job, but under careful, scrutinous study, there's always room for improvement ;)
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It totally looks like the show
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LightFang007Hobbyist General Artist
Makes me think to my story.
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Nova-NocturneProfessional Digital Artist
Cuuute!
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