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.....The pain that she hides

Divider II by RBSRdesigns
Behind her smile is the pain that you will never understand....

Dedicated to friends, :iconmegan7: and :iconmarphilhearts:

:LilyoftheValley: by a-kid-at-heartHappy Belated Birthday to both of you!:LilyoftheValley: by a-kid-at-heart

Happy Birthday Alice by KmyGraphic

Model
Hair brushes

♥ Thanks to all the stock providers for their wonderful stocks. 

I  welcome every views, faves and comments and I am unable to thank each and everyone personally, so just in advance..thank you so much, know that it is greatly valued and appreciated!

My work may not be reproduced, copied, edited, published, transmitted, uploaded, or sold in any way without my permission.

Divider II by RBSRdesigns

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Image size
2280x2807px 5.2 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D300
Shutter Speed
1/160 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
24 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Aug 10, 2009, 3:36:24 PM
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Bluefiregrl's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

First of all let me just start by saying that I love your work and your technique is absolutely fantastic.

Your use of lighting and sparkles/smoke is fantastic. As is your over painting work.

My notes:

On her shoulder closest to the window we see that she has a bit of light coming onto the shoulder, this light should also be reflected in her hair near the window.

On the opposite side of her hair you also have a few hairs that are standing out. One almost looks like a black half circle and the other looks like it may have been a line of smoke but it's hard to tell.

I also think the glow (smoke) on the right side of the photograph is a little too bright to be on its own. I probably would have brought more in or not included the tiny line at all.

All that being said, phenomenal work on the outlining, rose, skin, sparkles and lighting. Incredible technique.
SummerDreams-Art's avatar
I truly and greatly appreciated the fact that you took time to post a really fair and wonderful critique.

Thank you so much for pointing out my flaws and areas that I could improve upon.
I am still learning to paint hair and that too with the mouse, so it was really difficult for me to cast some of the light falling from the window on her hair.

When a particular art takes me too long, I tend to overlook the small details. So all that you have pointed out was simply my ignoring them despite knowing that it needed to be rectified, lol!

But all in all, thank you so much for your lovely feedback, it is really appreciated!:heart:
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Thank you so much!:heart:
Fizza-Digitalart's avatar
awesome!! love the hairs Clap 
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Thank you, glad you liked it!:heart:
Wesley-Souza's avatar
wonderful work :wow: I love the color and effects :love:
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Wow, thanks so much Wesley!!:heart:
Lora-Vysotskaya's avatar
Stunningly beautiful🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Le-Regard-des-Elfes's avatar
Very beautiful work ! :love:
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oh wow, this is amazing xxx
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Thank you so much dear!:heart:
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alanleal22's avatar
Beautiful colours and atmosphere. 
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Thank you so much!:heart:
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