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the red
the red
coagulating
plotting
a way out
through the lavender
exterior

calm grey tumultuous now
streaked with fury
the red
the red

the newborn fear
was a stillborn affection
rolling
in utero
sight ex situ from
"reality"

stasis oasis
membrane of a fragile
but insiduous Yes
transpose now
invert
disengage
transpire
elapse

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the red
nov 4 2001
sln
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experiment

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sillygirl35126 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2001
expermentations are always nice, though I suck quite a great deal at them...::p (Razz) out:: this is real nice, I just can't figure out why I keep thinking of the colour, red!!! AHH!!

And ye harm none, do what ye will
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btrsweet Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2001
very unique..
love it!

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keen Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2001   Writer
red tide drools into sand...

without experimentation you cannot grow. and this opens a new door- walk thru...

step into the slipstream:
https://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php? id=99040
-flow-
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meglocrush Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2001
there's something the rain only knows. not sure if that's what this is about or not, but it was raining pretty hard 'round these parts that night wasnt it?

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(im not as eem as you think i am)
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cooper Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2001
Ur style is to unique, yet so great, i love it... esp all ur endings like this one.... kinda reminicant ones... great work

@coop@
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dreamz13 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2001
interesting experiment. I wish I am clever enough to make more sense of it though. Like the way you match stasis and oasis together. very interesting indeed.

8) (Cool) Dream on... 8) (Cool)
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hesitation Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2001  Hobbyist Photographer
experiment good.
want more experiment.
:smiles:
me brain no work, want sleep.
poem cool though

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Woman by Birth
Bitch by Choice
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