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the delicate man


quietly reads your thoughts
decodes the sinews of your moving emotions
he pervades in reflected eyelight
coursing through the air, longings broken
windows laden with words of new
and shattered dew at his palm

crystallise

and in slow, ascending notes
he derives the time
from the universe's dimensions
inflections in his subtle questions
your own mind, a drunken stupor
swirling, a marble pattern emerges
and submerges conscious resistance
in him eye exist

billowing

a haunted floe of ice
breaking on the warming sea
further disintegrate
the delicate man
his shadow on the sun's lonely brow
and with an arrow pierced
his delicate moon

rising


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sumalangitnawa
june 27, 2001
i was summarising "The effect of income on the extraction of non-timber tropical forest products" accompanied by a cherry pepsi (it has a gruesome taste by the way) and "Doughnut Song" in my ears.

she said "Blood can be pretty like a delicate man".
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lustrum Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2001   Writer
you know, it's 3:07am, and i can't stop reading. ;) (Wink)
perhaps i am not apt to comment on this one, although its words are wonderful, its meaning and intent are maybe for another ilk, tu sais.

lustrum
http://www.lustrum.org
Rushing towards singularity.
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skyOrange Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2001
ocean-like
its surface reflecting
the delicate moon's reflected light
shattered slowly

dancing.


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your poems always introduce new worlds to me. vast and spectacular universe of poetic inspiration you've got, mari.



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miss-conception Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2001
your vision pierce into his existence.

submarine in the forest of thoughts.

beautiful mellow tone, liquoriced tasting words, delicate broken pieces pulled like magnet, forming a puzzling prose of subconscious reality...the currents of your blood stream..

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