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table for two please
by the back wall
close to the kitchen

we need an anchor
tell us the waiter's name
he serves dry merlot
in opaque wineglasses

i know you and no one else
bu nedir?
the core is real, you've seen it
but our existence is in question
bubir diwadir

unsettled fluid mind
if you please
table for two, and an anchor too.

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table for two
dec 31, 2001
sln
it's romantic alright

ha.
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kervansaray Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009
Make reservations, I will be there!
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oddlyaromatic Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
This is pretty.
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chaplinchild Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2003
girl... you nail the idea when you have one. i've read your work before (i've been away for a while) but i'm reminded of what attracts me to your work: i can relate. it's a great talent you have. and also; i love the picture that goes with the poem....

thanks girl
have a good one

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thesimpleplan Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2003
Whatever bu nedir means, it can't be as bad as yarak kafa and other such Turkish profanities that come to mind.

Like your style sumalangitnawa --- off to look at your gallery

Peace
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sillygirl35126 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2002
Very unique, I must say. Great work, once again.

And ye harm none, do what ye will
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skyOrange Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2002
not a date? then,
make that table for three,
include me! include me!
will bring my own anchor
and t to e dictionary :D (Big Grin)

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keen Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2002   Writer
you don't date?!

-whatever-

scan your
hand sensuous
and tell me
-things-
i don't understand.

lower yourself into:
https://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php? id=96646
-flow-
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lustrum Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2002   Writer
ill come back to this. but i thought id back you up and say that i dont date either.

bah.

lustrum zarązskur
http://www.lustrum.org
A labyrinthine tale of God.
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frail Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2002  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thought provoking but not heavy-handed

which is nice.

it's good to have a break from the heavy-handed

great wordplay

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rajivmathur Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2002
you don't date !
does that mean i have no chance ? :o (Eek)


;) (Wink)

rajiv--
tf. ts. ths.

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dreamz13 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2002
I think it's pretty funny. What does
bu nedir and bubir diwadir means? And merlot! I know someone would take a fancy to that. ;) (Wink)

8) (Cool) where dreams meet reality 8) (Cool)
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-muse- Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2002
lol at the comments... :P (Razz)
As for the poem - I very much like it. :) (Smile)
"table for two, and an anchor too" I like that image. Those two lines, though, I assume are not in English, so I don't quite understand the poem in its entirety... :P (Razz)
But I still like it! :) (Smile)

-muse-
be well
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sumalangitnawa Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2002
LMAOF @ my own comment.
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sumalangitnawa Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2002
funny somnambulist.

i don't date.

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somnambulist Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2002
lol, bad dating experiences. :P (Razz)

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