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it's round
it's found
it's in my hands

profoundly bound
it cracks
and hurls itself
with futile power

lost, again

blue blue fading to

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not exactly zen
ika-10 ng disyembre 2001
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trying to make nonsense out of the the world

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jsenn Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2002
whoa! I am making inroads in poetry heretofore uncommented, huh? This one does seem a bit heavier than the last. It may be the profoundly bound thingy that threw me, especially when it cracked and hurled itself with futile power. Dang, this is awful, here I am tongue-in-cheek and the meaning of this is probably very serious....yikes. Oh, you are trying to make nonscense out of this world? Hmmm, someone beat you to it.
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