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eternity's finger fiddles
with most moments
gone beneath a whisper


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sumalangitnawa
1999
another fridge magnet poem. my fridge magnets are on vacation since i just moved and i only have this tiny cube of a fridge on which only a haiku would fit. i'm no good at writing haikus.
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miss-conception Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2001
so Other-worldly, no.11, but i'd always loved your fridge magnet poems.~

in between the timeless air,
the living Now stare
where Eternity has been.

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locussolus Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2001
is eternitys finger comet hyakutake? this poem is simple, but i cant sort it out. it isnt simple i guess. i told ya, poetry is a pain in the neck.

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faithwalker Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2001  Student Photographer
I like this alot! Funny!

Faithwalker

Constant and Never ending improvement

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skyOrange Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2001
hahaha. funny description.

ehrm.

and juicy poem. ;) (Wink)

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jsenn Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2001
Well you could call it a Western Haiku cause they just ain't no rules to them thar Western Haiku's. I would call yours a Western Haiku.

I would also call it very important cause moments which have gone beneath a whisper will always be finger fiddled by eternity. That's just the way it is. Shoot! but it took me a long time to learn that!

-*-joy-*-

(join in the protest for the return of animated smiley stickers, type hahaha instead)
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sillygirl35126 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2001
About the best three lined poem I've ever read. Hehehe. Very nice, indeed.

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