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journ
in the greygreen plains
where black text reigns
creating architectures of thought
with ink of ones and noughts

so peace by piece
laid light upon
and won by one
neural fireworks were lit

and to deviate there was norm
burning images in light
shadowns in the mind
too, night

..sln..
may 29 2001
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jsenn Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2001
But...
But...it was 5-29
Wha...where is my comment?

and right there, right there, she sat down and cried. She cried for what she'd missed, for what she saw, she cried for all the creatures large and small sonlyfitting, then she cried again for failure, for disappointment, and for you and she herself even was really mixed up inside there but the tears were real.

o but it goes on

she cried until her tears made a river which rolled toward the sea and in the river appeared millions, I mean it was teeming with swithly whispering fish. They told their secrets all at once and I heard them, well, I heard a bunch of them, and then they disappeared, the river dried up, grey green plains spread far and wide and there was peace in the piece.

sonlyfitting
hadtobe
greenandpoetry

-*-joy-*-
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skyOrange Featured By Owner May 30, 2001
huh? i didn't.. get it..


kidding!! a magnificent poem written in the greygreen plains of a magnificent site.

"neural fireworks." mmm. yummy words.


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miss-conception Featured By Owner May 30, 2001
you captured the essence :) (Smile)
journ!~ where art meets application, codes are spinning..in a patchwork of grounds and backgrounds, of solid bases and unseen faces..where art meets application, i met you "peace by piece"..~

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sirmorphix Featured By Owner May 29, 2001
Very cool, but please, for personal reasons avoid saying norm in the future ok? lol, nevermind me.

Great poem. Plus I love the picture on the top.

Cheers
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Asuka rocks, so does blue.
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The prophecy of blue is starting...
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lustrum Featured By Owner May 29, 2001   Writer
interesting wordplay, good job

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Rushing towards singularity.
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