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i bend
and the holeness
manifest
within the sheath of my tissue
without the breath of my issue

tender beaten
wisked
gelatinous strands
amorph
devolve

past
frosted passion
aflame blue
unsure
wanting
wanting

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a strain of yes
nov 19 2001
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Given 2003-12-17
a strain of yes by ~sumalangitnawa sumalangitnawa was one of the first among us. one of the first to open her welcome to join the lit community and play a role in its shaping. what i saw in her writing was something akin to my own drive for magnitude in the least words possible. ( Featured by keen )
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Talonclawfange Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2003  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's...deep
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laidbackinsanity Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2003  Hobbyist Filmographer
over my head, I guess. I'd say I don't like the word sheath but you probably don't care. A blend of zen and science. Rock on if other people see it, I'm afraid I don't.

'Frosted Passion' and 'Aflame blue' work very well together.
cheers
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orchid-darkstar Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2003
It seems so frantic and scattered, yet at the same time cool and collected. No cliches were used (and that's always a nice thing)

Truly lovely in its suffering and confusion :hug:
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rebelchic Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2003
I am impressed.
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sillygirl35126 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2001
man, I'm quite speechless too! Believe me, this is probably a good thing:0)

And ye harm none, do what ye will
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jsenn Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2001

:D (Big Grin)

Joy
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keen Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2001   Writer
you have such duality to your poetry mari- the blend of zen and its near antithesis, science...

dear pot,

this is kettle. you're black.

sincerely,
pot


;) (Wink)


step into the slipstream:
https://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php? id=99040
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meglocrush Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2001
you skirt.

:meglocrush: https://meglocrush.deviantart.com
(im not as eem as you think i am)
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cooper Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2001
Ur poems are so intelligent and thought out... i envy ur talent... wow.... nice work

@coop@
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dreamz13 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2001
interesting like hell. kinda reminds me of flu.

8) (Cool) Dreams are my reality 8) (Cool)
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noize Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2001
past
frosted passion

present eye controlled

the images of what come to your mind

still there still there

wanting you

too

just wanting

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passenger Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2001  Student
Very nice poem. I love how it floats. Awesome.

Toast i like toast Toast
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faithwalker Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2001  Student Photographer
You leave me speechless, truly.

Faithwalker
Trout

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