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sheer words form a veil
about the mouth
above the mound
of a cavern hollowed out of
desire and delusion

human, open with eyes
with your hands
so small
you drift
within a strange and beautiful place
a tragic place

this immensity has to make
sense to you
you are its mind
but mind is not everything
it is not the ultima

o flock
against winds and will
the pain [set still
by your thought-webs]
sails above your dreams
hold fast, crumble not
believe what you want
to believe
believe that you could
be wrong

faith is cure
faith is disease
faith is light
faith is darkness

do you see?
human, two eyes
two hands
two to make one -
the cosmos had to be dichotomous
it is its beauty
it is its fall

...
Hating-buo
nov 4 2001
sln
...

Hating-Buo = Split-Whole

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sillygirl35126 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2001
balance, yes, a beauty all its own. Love this one!

And ye harm none, do what ye will
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keen Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2001   Writer
tao:
balance / collapse
ebb / flow
order / entropy
love / hate
life / death
static / dynamic

we live as binary creatures in a world of duality... and religion seeks to push the balance to the side of 'good' when the natural order of things is a balance between good / evil, pain / elation...

another thought-provoking piece d'resistance!

step into the slipstream:
https://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php? id=99040
-flow-
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meglocrush Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2001
my hollow cavern is stuck open in awe. the last three lines are amazing.

:meglocrush: https://meglocrush.deviantart.com
(im not as eem as you think i am)
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cooper Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2001
dont u see... ur so amazing... damn i like this one.... great work.... wow....

@coop@
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dreamz13 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2001
Wow though-provoking stuff. But it flows extremely well. Interesting idea you have there.

8) (Cool) Dreams are my reality 8) (Cool)
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faithwalker Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2001  Student Photographer
Big words indeed. Big words mean very little except when strung together to form a cohesive whole, a congruent story.

You have put these big words to a wonderful working way.

Faithwalker
Trout

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hesitation Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2001  Hobbyist Photographer
Hesitating between the two, eh?
:smiles:
very nice poem, as usually

---------------
Woman by Birth
Bitch by Choice
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flashmind Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2001
ahhh big words :) (Smile) good vocab. I am not sure where you came up with the words and rythem to come up with that poem but it is fantastic.
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