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ephemeral, slowly and with a dark disposition
accept surrender
fleet

unable to draw the universe
from rigid fingers
unable to draw longing
far frigid, lingers
and thus, poetry dries up
on my cheeks
cracks my lips

no hidden wisdom
in missing
misguidedly searching
disfigured memories for
something solid
through the sordid
floral morbid
whispers wither under
a souless megaphone

shush, count the moments
no
don't count the moments
they are independent of you

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dry words, unable
dec 22 2001
sln
...
an ode to inability
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keen Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2002   Writer
'don't count the moments
they are independent of you'

couplet punctuation: trademark. nice piece mari.

lower yourself into:
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sillygirl35126 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2002
Very very very interesting... creative and well thought through... I've never ever imagined such as this: poetry dries up
on my cheeks
cracks my lips

amazing, truly amazing


And ye harm none, do what ye will
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dreamz13 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2001
Ooh that's pretty abstract. Somehow it kinda reminds me of your icon. Maybe it's the first part.

Sleepy where dreams meet reality Sleepy
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somnambulist Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2001
Powerful piece here. :) (Smile)

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Poo It happens, blame the Kitty-chan
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klf Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2001

wow! I love your style, the words flow together very beautifully creating such a wonderful picture.
very cool.
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noize Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2001

zang zang
tumb tum!

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