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"I want to wake up"

- humanity



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the thing i want the most.
self-explanatory.
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skyOrange Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2001
you missed the submission date, mari. sayang.

hmm. your poem has diverse meanings. humanity waking up into reality, as if everything is a dream, or a nightmare. or waking up and coming to his senses, realizing that what he is doing is wrong, or bad. but then again, if this is what he wishes, he already knows that he is doing something wrong. or perhaps humanity speaks as one entity, and knows that parts of him (humanity) is 'asleep,' and it is those parts which he wishes to wake up. hmmm.

few words.. few words.. and i think i bruised my brain with them. ha!
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babysista Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2001
hey. you stole a line from a poem that i've never submitted! hehe... great minds think alike, they say. =D (Big Grin) and sure... i'll teach u malay... not much diff from indon/phillipinian/tongan i'm pretty sure.


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